Rewrite of the letter Romeo and Juliet

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Dear Father,

The last few days I have done so many of my greater sins but one I have not regretted. For it is my great devotion of love towards a Capulet, Juliet. It is her that made my heart keen of prolonged purpose.Every Time I look at her it feels as if I could never go days without talking to her,months without seeing her, but not a second goes by that I don't think of her. The feelings I have for her come so sudden as if out of the blue. It is as if the angels want me to pay attention to my feelings. The hidden ones that may emerge to be cleared of sins and remind me that the love I feel is for Juliet.One that I would gladly give up or risk my life for.

My misdeeds have spoken to me to take the primrose path. The misdeeds have left me with longer hardship and agony to see my beautiful Juliet.As she lays in her grave I am left here in agony. The painful love is still here in me,it is left unshown and one that cannot be expressed anymore. It is as the butterflies in my stomach had just died and my heart is broken and can no longer become fixed. As if the raging fire in me rises and decreases because of my weakness every time a tear falls. It is the memories that sneak out of my eyes and roll down my cheeks that make it harder for me to accept her death.

Even so, I think about whose faults it was due to her death and mine that shall be taken with hers in life everlasting. It is the disgraceful enmity between Montagues and Capulets.The great sins took upon your favors and caused a sacrifice. So it is as it seems death must resolve altercation. For it is the only way for Montagues and Capulets to have harmony and friendship.As I take upon that great sin and create harmony and friendship I will gladly take my life so that I may live in the afterlife with my devoted and considerate wife Juliet. Together we are one and so as for the rest shall do the same and live in refinement for the rest of your life.

Love yours,

Romeo