Forever Young (Louis Tomlinson Fanfic)

Chapter 20

I locked my door and sprawled out over my bed and cried. Yeah I know, I was acting like a little girl, but I didn't care. I just wanted to lay there and cry for hours and hours.

Which is exactly what I did.

When I stopped crying, it was about 2:30AM. The party music was still going but the sounds of the guests started to die down. I was happy that the party was nearly over.

I heard a knock at my door. "Mal?" a voice said. I instantly knew it was Louis. "Mal, love, are you alright?"

I sniffled, got up, and opened the door. He looked at me like he usually did, and ignored all the makeup that was running down my face.

He sighed, came in, and closed the door. He sat on the edge of my bed and held his arms out to motion for me to come sit on his lap and tell him about it.

To be dead honest, I didn't want to tell him about it, but I did appreciate his comfort. So I sat down on his lap and sighed, setting my head on his chest.

He wrapped his arms around me and said, "I'm so glad to get out of there. Zayn started to dance with me and called me Barbra Streisand."

I laughed. "He's so drunk," I said, taking my heel off.

Louis nodded. "You wanna change and go to my room?"

I nodded and got up and changed into my new pajamas. I took off my makeup and let my hair down. I brushed my teeth and went into Louis's room.

Louis was climbing into bed as I walked in. I crawled in and cuddled with Louis.

"This is what my dad and I would do when I was little and there was a really bad storm," I said, starting to tear up.

"Nuh uh," Louis said. "You've done enough crying for the day."

I nodded. "You're right," I said. I turned to face him and I gently kissed him for about 30 seconds. Then I pulled away and said, "Night, Louis."

"Night," Louis said. He hesitated before saying, "I love you."

I didn't know what to say as I drifted off to sleep. But I'm pretty sure that before I was completely asleep I muttered back, "I love you too."

--7 HOURS LATER....--

I woke up to the sun shining through the window and an empty bed. I sighed and sat up.

Today was the day I was going to become a vampire.

But what about Alice? She'd freak out and instantly think we were from Twilight.

I didn't know what to do at this point.

--Louis's POV--

I sighed and sat on the couch with a cup of coffee in my hand.

"When are you going to bite her?" Zayn said. "You promised all of this to the council like, a month ago. We both know they're going to start asking questions."

"I know, man!" I yelled. I sighed again and took a sip of the coffee. "I planned on doing it tonight."

"Well, I would consider hurrying up. Zack's going to try and kidnap her at 10," Zayn said.

"How do you know?" I said, looking at him suspiciously.

"I spied on him and his pack last night," he said. "They came to the party."

"What?" I said, standing up in surprise. "How did they get in without us knowing??"

"They must've hidden their scents," Niall said from the kitchen. "Duh."

"I gotta go ask Mal if she met anyone," I said, getting up and walking upstairs.

I walked into my room and saw that she wasn't there, but I heard the shower running. Okay, so she was in the shower. I sighed and walked downstairs.

"She's in the shower," I announced to Zayn and Niall.

"Can I go join her?" Zayn said teasingly.

"I'm not too sure if Perrie would be okay with that," I said with a chuckle.

"Erm... actually, we broke up," he said, rubbing his arm. "She caught me snogging Tiffany."

"You mean that one really pretty girl who's kissing you all the time?" Niall said, leaning on the couch only to end up falling onto it.

We laughed and then Zayn said, "Yeah, her."

Tiffany came out wearing one of Zayn's shirts. "Morning," she yawned.

I dropped my voice to a whisper. "Did you bang her last night?" I said.

"One, I was drunk, and two, I believe the correct term is have sex," Zayn said, using air quotations around the words 'have sex'.

I heard the shower turn off. "I'll be back," I said, running up the stairs.

I got to my room and knocked on the bathroom door. "Mal, can I come in?" I said.

"I'm naked, Louis," she said.

"It's about the biting," I said.

"Can we talk about it when I get out?" she said.

"No!" I yelled. But then an idea flashed into my head. "Never mind," I said. I raced back downstairs.

"Mates!" I said. "I've got an idea."

"What?" Niall said. Zayn was in the kitchen with Tiffany.

I dropped my voice to a whisper. "I'm going to get Mail as drunk as possible and then bite her," I whispered. "Then she won't feel it."

"She's gonna feel it anyway," Niall whispered. "Even if she is as drunk as hell."

I shrugged. "She won't feel it as badly, then."

--A/N--

I hope you enjoyed the chapter!! I apologize if it's a bit short, but I've had a really busy weekend and day.

So I thought that I would get into the routine of asking a random question at the end of each chapter. Some of them will be about the book, other's just random.

So here's the question: Do I need to improve anything? If not, then what do you think of it?

xoxoCarly(: