Kidnapped With Louis Tomlinson

Chapter 10: The Terrible News

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Ally's POV

Everything was dark, and it was getting harder and harder to breath. Where was I? I could hear the sound of a car driving but I was still unsure of why I was in a car and why darkness was the only thing surrounding me.

I tried to open my eyes but it was no use. It felt as if they were glued together and I would never b able to open them.

I could hear talking in the background, but none of which I could understand. I tried to move but it felt like there were rocks on me, holding me down.

I tried to talk but nothing came out, with my mouth staying closed.

I wonder where we were going, and who was taking me to wherever we were going. What if the big boss had finally gotten hold of me and was now taking me somewhere to hide me? What if she was trying to kill me?

All of these thoughts left me mind as I suddenly could no longer breath at all.

Louis' POV

I turned around and there I saw yet again an unconscious Ally. Her face was getting paler by the minute, and it looked like she couldn't breath. It was actually pretty scary.

"Are we almost there, Mark? Ally looks pretty bad right now. I am actually kind of scared."

Mark turned around for a split second and faced me again.

"We need to get there fast. She is not breathing too well. It looks like we could loose her any second." He pushed harder on the pedal and drove around cars. I could hear the faint sirens of a police car in the background, but I shook the thought from my head.

We turned a corner and the hospital came into view. We pulled into a parking spot and I immediately rushed out of the car, opening the back seat where Ally laid on top of Zayn. I picked her up off of him and he quickly got out of the car. We ran into the doors of the emergency room and I looked around for someone who could possibly help us.

"CAN SOMEBODY PLEASE HELP US? THIS GIRL IS UNCONSIOUS RIGHT NOW AND I THINK WE ARE LOSING HER!"

A couple doctors immediately came to our side, obviously hearing my little speech. Some men were behind them and they brought a stretcher. I laid Ally down and kissed her forehead.

"Get better, Ally. You can't leave us." The men then rushed Ally to a room and I was left standing there. I know it was kind of weird but I felt a special connection with Ally, like we had known each other longer than 2 days. It was a weird feeling talking to her, but it was also very familiar. I just couldn't put my finger on it.

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Third Person POV

A doctor came out and broke the news to the boys. Louis and Mark both fell to the ground and started bawling their eyes out. Mark had known Ally his whole life while Louis had just met her the day before, yet they both had the same reaction to Ally being in a coma. They couldn't believe what had just happened.

The doctor said that there was a very dangerous type of poisoning in the water that Ally drank which made Ally pass out. She was out for too long though and that is what put her in a coma. The doctors had no way of knowing when Ally would wake up or if she would even wake up.

Zayn was also getting a little teary eyed and was no longer holding it in. There was tear marks staining his face and he looked terrible. Nothing compared to what Louis and Mark looked like but he still looked terrible.

They just didn't understand why this happened to Ally. But things happen to certain people, and though they may not like the outcome, it always happens for a reason.

Mark's POV

My little girl was in a coma at age 12. I couldn't believe it and wouldn't believe it. There was no way. But the doctors did say.

I know right away that it was her. There was no one else to look at. Who else was in the house anywise besides her? No one. Exactly. I also knew that Zayn or Louis didn't do it, and come on, do you really think Ally would do this to herself? Exactly my point.

I asked the doctors if we could see Ally, and they said for only a couple of minutes because she needed to go do some tests. A couple of minutes was all that I needed.

I told the boys that I would be right back and then walked into room 208. This was it. This was where my little girl was laying in a coma. I opened the door fully and walked up beside her bed. There was Ally, except she didn't look like the Ally that I had raised. Instead she looked lifeless, nothing left in her to keep fighting.

"NO! NO NO NO!" I punched the wall and left several holes with every punch. Doctors soon rushed in from the noise that I had caused.

"Sir, we are going to have to ask that you leave now. You are disturbing the other patients."

I was now pretty close to punching her.

They took hold of my arms and escorted me out.

I took one last glance at Ally before shutting the door fully.

Oh baby girl, please wake up.