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When someone taunts you, you can get help, right? Wrong. When you are the only one who can see them, does that mean you are crazy? They come and taunt me; kick me while I’m down. Who are they? They are faeries. Some are beautiful and righteous, clean white snow. The others are sexy, seductive, dangerous and dark; they are your fear that’s hidden under your bed.
Before I started seeing fey I was the high school sporting champion. The boys said they let me win during sport, I doubt that, they were all just as competitive as I am. When I was playing sport I was in control. The groan of your muscles, fatigued, but you feel strong, like you can't be broken....Being broken sounded impossible to me not very long ago.
The thing that the fey took away from me, which I missed the most, was my boyfriend.... He had tried to help me, tried to get me to see someone; but I wasn't interested. I was broken, am broken. He deserved better than me. After two years of being unable to be separated all it took was the fey to break me to the point of being unable to be put back together.