Five Degrees from Freezing - Larry Stylinson

Chapter xvi - Sunshine Yellow

Hi :) this is the chapter where Louis takes Harry on the date :D Please comment, vote and especially tell me what you think of it.
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"You look nice." The Prince's voice complimented from somewhere high above Louis' head. "Very refreshened."

"It's refreshed." Louis corrected, not turning to look at Harry. He continued to rattle the keys in the stiff lock, kicking at his front door until it shut completely. He didn't thank Harry, partly because it wasn't his style, but mainly because he didn't believe him, so he just shuffled past the tall boy and jumped down the steps to the old battered car he owned. He opened the passenger door which snapped loudly, creaking as if it was a second away from falling off its hinges.
Louis held it open, looked Harry up and down, then turned his eyes to the small seat. "You're not going to fit in there, are you?" He sighed, not really asking, just confirming the statement.

"I might, if I sit in the back." Harry suggested, pointing a diamond ringed finger at the three seats behind. "You should probably buy a new c-"

"I'm not rich like you." Louis snapped, interrupting Harry. "Buying a pair of jeans is expensive for me, so don't start with your shit talk about buying a new car because it's not going to happen."

He swung the back door open and a spark flew out. "Get in."

Harry nodded, following Louis' orders until he was in the back seat. "It's actually quite roomy in here." He said, moving his feet so Louis could slam the door shut. He watched the man walk around the car. He didn't look as tired as usual, just expressionless. His hair was sleeked back and he had a new shirt on. Harry wondered why he had made himself look that good, maybe he had just got home from work..

The door slammed shut and the engine started. Louis' eyes met Harry's through the rear-view mirror, but turned back to the road. Harry braced himself as the car let out a black cloud of smoke before moving unevenly down the smooth road.

He wondered where they were going. All that he knew was that he had received a message from William himself, that he would need to look extra-tidy because he was going to visit Zayn and Louis, except when he had arrived at their house, Zayn wasn't there, and Louis was looking exceedingly spruced up.

He thought about the reasons, every one crossing his mind, but the fact that he was going on a date, and the car stopped. He watched Louis take off his seat belt and get out the vehicle. "Did we break down?"

"Shut it, brat." Louis replied, opening the door to where Harry sat, "we're here."

Harry let out an 'oh' sound and stood up. He looked around. He was in the middle of nowhere, by the side of an open forest. The car was parked at the edge of a dirt-track and Harry assumed no one ever came down it.

He walked on his tiptoes so his heels didn't sink in the forest soil, and followed Louis down a small path where they landed in front of a pile of rocks with the sound of waterfall flowing. Harry walked around the rocks, and looked down to see water. It was crystal clear and tumbled aver the pile of white rocks, glistening in moss. At the bottom of the waterfall was a pool buried in the forest ground, covered in pink petals from a cherry tree. The whole structure looked so natural, yet so out of place in the woods.