Temptation

its been a year and a half since I been here in Marvel High School California, I moved to Vegas high school ( in Las Vegas) when i was in 10th grade, now am a senior. so i decided to finish school in my old school with my old friends. my old friends haven't seen me since i left, when i left I was fat, had short brown hair and well i was pretty plain and lame. I moved states because I started liking street racing and well i went to Las Vegas to race there and joined a racing gang ( i still went to school).  i left my family and everything. well my old friends are Jill, Emma, Abbie, Johnny, and Blake. When i moved I cut all ties to friends and family and my family doesn't want to talk to me anymore. 

Me and Hiro were starting school today and i  took my Bugatti veyron super sport. Hiro had his own place but i didn't move in with him because i wanted my own place since i was going to stay her permanently. So i bought my own house (did i mention am rich :D). Before i got to school i stopped in Mcdonalds to buy some food. when i sat down to eat i took out my phone and called my cousin abbie ( she's the only family member that talks to me) 

phone conversation 

Abbie- hello 

me- hey abbs whatchu doing?

abbie- umm who's this?

me- aww what you don't remember me?

abbie- no who the fuck is this?!

me- jeez someones on a bad mood today, its your amazing cousin raven!!

abbie-.........Raven? is that you?

me- well no shit idiot!! what chu doing???

abbie- sorry its cause well its been a while since we talked. oh am in front of school with the group why?

me- oh, really you guys still hang out!! oh well cause am here in hollywood and well am going back to the old school 

abbie- yeah we still hang out even if you left us!! what no way!! your lying!!! where are you???

me- ouch that hurt my feelings, nope am not lying oh am here in mcdonalds eating but i'll be there in 5 minitius tops

abbie- hurry up!!! i wanna see you!! i'll tell the group bye 

me- lates 

i clicked and called Hiro

Hiro- hey whats up babe

me- hey where are you?

Hiro- am 8 minutes away from school you?

me- am in mcdonalds eating but am on my way to school already, oh i called them already and they wanna see me!

hiro- ahahaha you would go to mcdonalds right now hmm lets see who gets there first if i win you give me 50 bucks and if you win i'll give you 50 bucks 

me- challege accepted!!! you better have my money ready!

i clicked and ran to my baby. I was turning when i saw hiros car right in back of me and i laughed yes!!! i get 50 bucks :D when I was parking I saw the group staring at our cars and I smiled. I dought they'll recognize me, I have long white and blue hair, am not fat anymore am skinny but i have curves in all the right places i have big boobs, a nice ass :D, i have peircing's ( sorry the girl in the picture has no piercing's but just picture them on her) i have the bridge, my septum, angel bites and a labyrinth and well I dressed "scene"/ "emo" thats what people say but thats me ^_^. today I had a ripped Suicide Silence t shirt that showed my black bra and I had some super tight clack skinnys with my toms :) when I got off the car people guys were smiling and they had a lustful look in there eyes and girls looked at me with hate in there eyes so I just flipped them off. Hiro was getting off the car and laughed when he saw me flip the chicks out. he was wearing black skinny jeans with a slayer T-shirt and his toms. He walked towards me and grabbed my hand so we started walking towards the group. 

so what do you guys think of the new version, i think its better please vote and comment it will mean a lot to me  :DD