The rise of an old foe (Uncompleted)

The rise of an old foe

By: Alexandra Colmenares

Epilogue

The streets were quite but then out of nowhere a yowl rang out. The yowl of a cat. In the ally 2 cats were fighting. A brown tom and a gray tom while the surrounding cats watched. The brown tom raked the muzzle of the gray tom as it let out a screech of agony. It slid under the gray tom and unbalanced him. It fell on its back and at that same moment a cat sprang out of the crowed. "STOP!" she yowled. All eyes were on the white she-cat. "What is it Ice? Can't you see I'm in the middle of something?" asked the brown tom. "Hoot you're so inpatient these's days." Replied Ice

Chapter 1

Goldkit

When will she open her eyes?" asked a cat. "She'll open them when she's ready Frostfur." "I know Sandstorm I'm just asking. She'll be a strong warrior." Replied Frostfur with admiration in her voice. Goldkit wanted to open her eyes but was scared. What if the camp isn't what I expected? She thought to herself. She knew she had to be strong. Her sister Snowkit had opened her eyes the day before so why couldn't she? She knew she had to be strong so she took a deep breath and forced her eyes opened. The nursery was huge! Brambles weaved together made the roof and soft moss with grass made the floor. Light flooded through the entrance and as she stood up someone ran into her and landed on her as well. "Get off of me I can't breathe!" Goldkit complained. The she cat got off her she was white with blue eyes. "Goldkit you opened your eyes!" "Snowkit is that you?" Asked Goldkit in surprise. She hadn't seen Snowkit and only knew her scent. "I always thought you had blue eyes? But now I can see they're actually amber." Are they really amber? She thought. "They really match your fur."Snowkit replied. Goldkit looked at herself. She was golden with a white belly. "So now I see why they call you Goldkit." Snowkit said with a hint of humor in her voice. Both of them laughed. "What's all that racket?" complained a she cat "Frostfur Goldkit opened her eyes!" Snowkit squealed. Goldkit looked Snowkit's direction to see a frosty color she cat "Well it's about time. Firestar wouldn't want to know that one of the kits hasn't opened her eyes yet." Goldkit tilted her head to one side. Whose Firestar thought Goldkit? Snowkit must had sensed her confusion because she started to explain to her "Firestar's our dad mouse brained." Then a sparkle lit in her eyes "Plus Firestar is leader of our clan!" Well why don't you find Foxkit and have her show you and Goldkit around?" Frostfur suggested "I bet she's dying to see the camp." "Oh don't you know it." Goldkit replied bouncing up and down. This was the moment she's been waiting for

Chapter 2

Goldkit

Goldkit waited impatiently in the nursery for Snowkit. What's taking her so long thought Goldkit just then Snowkit came in with another she-kit. She was ginger with a white tip tail That must be Foxkit she thought "Hi I'm Foxkit and you must be Goldkit am I right?" she guessed with a strange French accent "Yeah." she said "Come on." she said turning to the entrance Goldkit followed. Foxkit showed her the Warrior den, apprentices den, medicine cat den, and elders den. Goldkit also met her dad he was really nice. "So what do you think?" Foxkit asked "Its amazing." Goldkit replied. "Yeah it's really something." Snowkit added. "Snowkit, Goldkit time to go to bed." Their mother called from the nursery "You too Foxkit." "COMING." The three of them called back in union. "Bye Foxkit." They said saying goodbye to their new friend "Goodbye guys see you tomorrow." And with that Foxkit went back to her mom and they went back to their mom "How was the tour?" Their mom asked curiosity filled her eyes "Very, very, very tiring." Snowkit said before she broke out into a yawn "My poor kits. Let's go to sleep." She said leading them to their nest. Sandstorm layed down in the nest and Snowkit curled up next to their mom. Goldkit looked at the camp before curling up next to her sister and mother. She felt her eyes grow heavy so she closed them. Soon she fell asleep and began to dream. In her dream she was stalking a mouse. She began to stalk it when it heard her and darted away. "Mouse-dung." She muttered to herself. Then she heard a voice The clan of blood shall return and destroy the clans. Only one can save the clans. What fate waited for the clans

Chapter 3

Snowkit

Snowkit was sleeping when she felt someone was pushing her. She opened her eyes to see Goldkit pushing her around "Goldkit stop pushing me."