Edward's new love ( a twilight story with a twist)

All characters are owned by S. Myers.

Chapter 1

Tori's POV

HMM I thought to my self what will I do today. Then I decided to go to the beach to swim and relax. As I glumly strolled to the beach I thought of my past life and how awful it had been. I was so glad to be out of that asylum for having visions and reading minds, but then again now I am lonely at least there I had a friend even if he was a vampire. But when he bit me he was killed in a fire, I miss him so he was so kind and taught me to eat animals before he changed me. I suddenly felt sand imbetween my toes so I ran to the ocean. As soon as I got out I went to my towel surprised to see two other vampires tracing my scent. Excuse me I whispered so only vampires could hear. The two men then turned around and lunged at me but I read their minds and avoided then. I turned to their befuddled faces and said I come in peace and for then to look into my eyes. When they did something happened that I did not expect two girl vampires tackled me. Suddenly I was being ran by four vampires to their house. As I sat there pouting I said that I would run myself to their house they stopped and looked at me. They asked me how I knew where they were going so I told them my gift. They set me down and told me to keep up, I smiled at this and said okay. At first I went slow but then I sped up and again they all stopped in bewilderment I just laughed and told them to hurry up.

Emmet's POV

Dang that chick is fast and amazing. When I said that Rose nodded then punched me hard, realizing my bluff I quickly said not as amazing as you though. Then she yet again punched me after that we took off to catch up with the girl.

Tori's POV

When we walked in the door I was stunned by the beauty of the house then smiling at me a beautiful man and woman came and hugged me then told me to come sit with them. I did as told and sat in a beautiful room. They asked me to tell them about myself I said okay then a breathtaking boy walked into the room and we had the same dumbfounded expression on our face making the whole family stare then I ran up to him and slapped him then sat back down. The whole family stared at me with wide eyes then I began. It all starts in 1870 I was put in an asylum for having visions and reading minds the people thought I was crazy so they gave me a doctor for extremely insane people it turns out he was a vampire and my best friend when a fire started in the asylum he was biting me because they had starved me too much I learned from him that I was to drink only animal blood which I have. But sadly he returned to the fire to save another patient when the fire consumed them. Shortly after that I awoke a vampire I don't know how it happened so fast it just did. My gifts are speed, seeing the future, reading minds, and having control over the blood I want. After that they asked ashy I smacked Edward I laughed and said because he was picking too deep within my brain. Suddenly I smelt something awful and passed out.

What do you think should I continue writing