So this will only be shared to you, Noelle, and all feedback is appreciated. I'm not very good at descriptions, but I have a pretty good idea of what to write.
-----------------------
The sun shone through my window and I groaned, looking around my room.
It was still messy from my frantic search for clothes to pack last night, and I vowed to clean it up when I got home.
I got up and smoothed down my long black hair as I shrugged some jeans and a black jacket on.
I took a last look in the mirror, catching a glimpse of my green eyes, the ones my father always told me my mother had, and grabbed my bag.
I ran downstairs and made breakfast, my dad packing his bag in his room.
I pulled some sneakers on and got in the car, we were going camping today.
---------------------------------
I edited the part a bit, but I don't think it's descriptive enough. I wish it let me do more words.
