The Man In The Black Cloak

Chapter 1

Walking down towards the school, where I had come across a abandoned graveyard, there was one grave that stood out. The grave had my second name on it, I looked around but there was no one. Then out of no where there was a flicker. I saw a house but from the outside it looked tall and skinny. There was a metal gate. I opened it an it screeched so loudly it was like a female elephant giving birth. I walked towards the house, up the long path. Then I reached the door, I looked around behind me to see if anyone was following me. There was no one to be seen. I went to knock on the door and it opened. I took a step back and a light turned on and a black figure was standing in the bedroom window. I was about to leave when the gate shut and locked its self. I was trapped no where to go. But the house.

I started walking into the front door. I saw family photos and candles that hadn't long been lit. I looked around and heard a glass smash from upstairs, so I made my way upstairs to see who was up there. I started picking up the pieces of glass up when the black figure was there and reached to me and all of a sudden. I felt nothing. My blood was going cold like I was starting to die. My skin was going blue like I was freezing inside and out. Guess that was the end of me.
Then I woke up and I wasn't where I last was, I was lying on a metal bed and the black figure was no where to been seen. I couldn't see anyway of getting out. All I could see was a room which was painted white. Then the black figure appeared.

The Black figure started coming towards me and I didn't know what to do. I started trying to Undo the ropes. I finally undid the ropes and the black figure disappeared.
I shouted so loudly "Who are you"
There was no response, until the black figure appeared again and said " I've known you since you were a child, I grew up with you" I started thinking and my parents only had 2 children. I asked him.
"What's your name"
He said his name was Ewan. Then I remembered I had a relative called Ewan. Is he my brother I was thinking. Is he the brother I lost years and years ago. I was so confused and didn't know what to do. I started running to the exit door which led to another white room, I kept running but I was just going in more white rooms in circles. I didn't have anywhere to go or anyone to help. So I dropped to the floor and started crying. By then I realised I was stuck no where to go. Not this time. No Door. No window. I'm trappaed.