The Lonley Man (1-5 Chapters)

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It all started when my dad went to Birmingham for 2 day's for something and I was left with my brother and my mum with my 2 pets. This is what happened.

Chapter 1, The Game

Me and my friend Dylan were going to the shop to buy some Gummy bears that we always have after school. We also went to the game shop to buy the game we ALWAYS wanted. When we got in, our eyes were captured by our favourite game "The Lonely Forest". Surprised, the cashier said "You can have it for free with a unlock code. We thought "Weird". When we got home we plugged the game into the playstation and it started up just like any game.

We screamed "oh YEAAH", and we got to the "Main Screen" and the "Press Start" was flashing. We started playing and it was JUST like Slender Man when it said "Capture 10 Le...". "Weird", I started moving around in the pitch black forest and I was already shivering and had a weird feeling about this game. After collecting 1 of the items you need to collect, we heard a "ROOOOAR" and this fast pacing music started and when we turned around, a white room appeared in-front of us and when ever we turned around the room turned white.

Our vision was being messed with and as soon as we collected all the items, we fell on the floor. 5 hours later, we woke up and the Screen was back to the Main Menu and this time it was more demonic. The Title had blood and it was 3-D. I tried the game again and the forest was day but the tree's were blood red and my characters hand was all bloody. We found signs along the way saying "Turn Back" and "Nothing can stop me".

Chapter 2, Turning back

We thought about returning the game back to the Game Shop *Total Entertainment* but as soon as we got there, it was boarded up and all the games were knocked off their shelfs. A man stood next to us and commented "He went mad....", but as soon as we turned around, he dissappeared. I phoned my mum and I told her to pick us up from the Car Park. She turned up in a flash, we got into the car and started driving. "Why you not at home?" asked Mum. "We brought this game and it was all horrible so we were going to bring it back to the store but as soon as we got there, it was boarded up". My mum didn't answer and didn't talk the whole way home.

We got out the car and headed into the house. I heard a "You can't run" in my head but I thought I was just imagining it. I noticed something paranormal, the Phone was off it's stand and there was a missed call by "DAD" but on the back of the phone carved in blood "H.I.M". I got some tissue from the bathroom and came back down to wipe the phone but then I heard a "Aaghhhh". I quickly ran to the Garden and saw Dylan holding a big stone and my Mum on the floor on her knee's.

"Get Out of Here" she squealed. I quickly asked her what happened but then she just froze. I ran outside and got into the car and drove to Birmingham.

Chapter 3, H.I.M

I saw my dad running with his Ear-phones in and his Mouth moving in tune to the song. I shouted "DAD" in the dark street in the loudest tone of voice. He turned around and dropped his I-Phone. "Son...what are you doing here...?" whispered Dad. "Mum and my Friend Dylan have gone mad, mums on the floor on her knee's and Dylan was holding a massive stone from the Garden".

We continued walking together and in the corner of my eye, I saw a man in the window mouthing something to me but I turned to look at my dad but he let go of my hand and I turned to look in the window and the figure was gone. I got a call from Mum saying "COME HOME NOW". I replied back "You told me to get out the house and you were on your knee's, it's too dangerous to come back". Shortly, I got a new message saying "YAD". I thought about YAD but it made no sense.

Chapter 4, Danger is here 

I thought about "YAD" and it started making sense, "You...are...dead". I just caught up with DAD and saw the I-Phone wasn't there and I couldn't hear a single noise. I then heard a "VRRRM" and then it hit me, I fell on the floor.

 I woke up in a strange room, full of bottles and what it looked like, bones. I was so tired that I fell asleep. About 20 minutes later, I woke up again but this time, instead of the wall painted black, it was painted white like I was in heaven or something. I got up and explored for a bit then *SLAM*. A guy who looked like the guy in the window grabbed me and threw me out the window and landed on a car.

Chapter 5, Never again


"YAAAAAH", I woke up in a quick second to see a figure limpering towards me, I quickly got up in a flash and dashed towards the car and got in. I saw that it had no petrol so I had to hide in a blanket in the back seat and wait for this to be over, "No, this has to be a dream". I heard a "Come back home, dear boy" and cried.

I wish I was back home....

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The End.

There are 2 bonus chapters, a good and a bad ending. Read both if you want to.

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Good Ending (Chapter 6, bonus)

I decided to find Dad again due to it being sad alone, so I ran around shouting "DAD" and after about 24 minutes, I saw him sitting on the bench looking down at his I-Phone.

"DAD"

"Why can't you go back home?"

"I had no petrol in the car, and I can't go anywhere"

"Also, why are you bruised?"

"I woke up in a place and got thrown out the window by a weird loony guy".

I guess he must of been tired because he took me to his hotel room and we both fell asleep.

We woke up about 10am and looked outside and there were actually people there, yesterday there were no cars and complete silence, now, there are car's, people chatting and much more fun. We decided to head home, it took us at least 12 hours to get there. We got out the car, and looked around and my friend Dylan wasn't there and Mum was watching TV with her kindle and my brother was playing on his 3DS.

We had dinner and we were so happy we were back together...

Bad Ending (Chapter 7, bonus) [Coming soon!]

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 12, 2014 ⏰

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