I'm dangerous, and have a taste for blood. But I'm not some sparkly vampire.

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Hello there, how're you doing? (:

This is just an intro to a story i'm trying to work out.

I'll post this, to see if anyone even bothers to read it.

If you do, then wow! I'm pretty honoured!

So this is a really short intro... like one of those little blurbs on the back of a book cover to try and get you to read it!

This is kind of like my test drive... if I get good reviews, then I'll post more of the story.

The main character is Reia Ille, a sixteen year old girl who lives alone in the woods.

The story is based on a fable I've heard long ago and just remembered.

I hope this is actually pleasing to some person out there. (:

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*Reia*

Silk blonde hair. Light blue eyes. Fair, ivory skin. Inviting pink lips.

From description I am a thing of beauty. A common Hitler's prize, as I liked to call it.

But I'm not common... not really.

I am a creature of the dark.

The people in Korea believe my kind is made from the purest of evil, and I believe it, too.

I just really wish I wasn't.

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that's all I can write for now, please comment and tell me your opinions, good or bad. (:

i think i can take it, don't you? :P

I've got to warn you though, i am a very wordy writer and I add too much detail.

i'll be happy to take pointers from you guys, so comment away! (:

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