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This story (previously titled Four Months with You) had undergone a major revision—emojis were removed, characters made more mature, and the plot turned a bit more realistic. Hey, I was fifteen when I wrote this. If you are rereading this, please do not get confused when you see that most of the characters' names have been changed. For example, Chi is now called Dee.

This was changed in a lot of ways. The first few scenes may appear familiar to those who are revisiting, but the new plotline picks up around the twenty-fifth chapter (I think). In the old version, we only glimpsed into the four main characters' POVs, but in this new version, you will see a lot of new perspectives.

Also, Pale As Dead's songs are no longer borrowed from ChicoSci (but give them a try if you haven't yet because they make amazing music). The new Pale As Dead's songs are written by yours truly. They are not finished works (no beat, melody, tune, rhythm, etc.) as all I have worked and focused on are the lyrics. I neither work nor dabble in the music industry (but I do love bands) so a great deal of creative license was used to write this series. Please, don't come after me. I am open to corrections and suggestions.

And as an additional, Cantu is a fictional city. I picture it located between Muntinlupa (Alabang area) and Las Piñas in Metro Manila, Philippines. Lesovostok, on the other hand, is another fictional city that I picture located in the Russian Far East, in the country's Maritime Territory. Lastly, I don't speak the other languages used here (Spanish, Russian, Japanese) so I've turned to Google Translate. Again, feel free to correct any mistakes made.

Whether you're liking the story or not, please do give out your feedback as it really helps me improve. I hope you're digging it though. And if you are, feel free to hit that vote button!

Thank you for all the reads you have given this story since it's been posted here in 2013. I am currently in the process of editing all my stories in here, removing all the remnants of my jeje days. The story remains set in 2012, like the original.

Cheers!

— 𝓋𝑒𝓃𝓊𝓈

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HEAD OVER TO https://kuraimiwako.yooco.org (external link) TO CREATE AN ACCOUNT AND INTERACT WITH THE SERIES' CHARACTERS!

It's an amateurly created social network, designed for the characters of the Pale as Dead series, where you can also create your own account, add them as friends, and send them messages and private chats. There are forums available as well, where you can find random stuff about the band, the school, and the city where they are all from (i.e. tracks in each album, song lyrics, facts about the members, album/single covers). It's still pretty much a WIP but the contents are pretty much good enough for now at least.

 It's still pretty much a WIP but the contents are pretty much good enough for now at least

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