one shy girl and one bad boy

Mae's life

hey y'all this is my first book!! plz tell me if it is bad i am scared y'all won't like it plz tell my and comment

Mae 

I am 17 years old. I have no brother or sisters. By the way Jes is a girl!

I walk inside my house and my puppy meets me by the door. I took him outside and looked at my phone..... 

Jes my friendish  texted "Hey girl I haven't seen you in a while and i miss ya!" I didn't respond. 

I took Sebastian back inside and started to make diner. I end up making spaghetti with Alfredo sauce. I hear a car pull up in the driveway and the door slam.  Oh Lord Here comes my evil step-mom "bitch" aka Liz. I have always called her by first name or I just Bitch. She opens the door and slammed the front door shut. 

" What the hack Mae where is my plate with my food on it"

"Sorry it's coming right up! what about Dad is he coming home to eat?

"no just give me my food"

"ok! OK!"

As i hand her the food i mumble bitch.

"what did you say smart ass?"

"nothing"

"that's what i thought you worthless piece of shit"

i turn around and go up stairs and i hear her following my but i shut my door and she opens the door and slaps me and a try to pull away and she punches me and then she lets go and goes back down the stairs. shit. i go into the bathroom and throw water up on my face. I pull out my razor blade and cut. i watch as it trickles down my arm into the sink and I do another until my left arm is covered and i feel relaxed and clam again. i take a long shower and put on my over sized long sleeve shirt and sweat pants. i go to my bed and i realized i was in the bathroom for an hour because it is 6:00pm and i sit down and look at my phone and texted Jes back saying  "hey sorry i have been busy but i will see you tomorrow." i set my phone down and lay back and i drift off to sleep!!