The Doll's Curse

Chapter One:The Start

Kelli stepped over the imaginary border she ruffly sketched in her memory holding mind.She was in the amusement park she always wanted to be in, The Horror Park.
Kelli was a very brave girl with light milk chocolate skin.She had black hair in a tight ponytail with a blue and black rubber band.Kelli had large, brown eyes with a gaze that could warm anybody's heart, even those who have face deep peril.She was adventurous, Kelli was the one who decided to go to Horror Park.She had a height of 4"11.She was 13 years old, she was excited to be here.
Right behind Kelli, Ali stood, also exited.Ali was very brave, just like Keli, she had more of a white color skin with bright red and blonde hair.She had beautiful green eyes that complemented her dress of bright green and black for the exciting and horrendous occasion.She had a height of 5"2.She and Kelli have been best friends since their first day of kindergarten.
Kelli looked around, excited.
A roller coaster that plunged underground after a high, slow, almost vertical upping.
To their left was a green and black merry-go- round that had dolls with severed heads and feet with deep cuts all over them.
In front of them, a navy blue with black striped automatic ticket seller that had a line.
"C'mon Kelli!"Ali said pulling her warm hand into the long line of customers ordering tickets.Utterly failing to.
Kelli was a very strong 13 year old.Despite her small size.
Kelli, still interested in the roller coaster, closed her eyes and imagined how excitingly scary it would be to plunge into probably darkness and lava, that's the meaning of a cool, scary roller coaster to Kelli, she was afraid of the dark, and she wanted the throw that fear out into the dumpster and forget it forever.
Finally succeeding in pulling her, she rushed over the cobblestone trail into the line of mostly tall, customers.
Kelli and Ali were lucky that the long line was moving pretty fast, which surprised both of them.Because they were buying at least 100 tickets for 50 dollars, the whole amusement park was half off, everything.
Before they knew it, they were in the front of the line, they were grateful for that.
Kelli inserted 70 dollars in tens into the slot that read, paper money insert here.
In permanent marker, on the side, it said, or you will DIE, YOU FLOOZY!
Ali laughed at this as Kelli snapped out 140 tickets.
They left the machine, just walking around, looking at the amazing sights, until they came upon the roller coaster Kelli mentioned in her mind.
"Oh Ali let's go here!"Screamed Kelli, almost hysterically.
Ali read the sign that was nearby silently.A black sign with white writing, decorated with white skulls and red blood.The sign read

  The Horror Ride of Death
To all of those seeking to overcome their fears of plunging deep, losing your stomach, to overcoming lava.
Take this literally breath taking ride and let away all your fears!
6 tickets per individual.

Kelli quickly took out the black ad white tickets, counted 12, six for each person, herself and Ali.

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