Changing Fate

Author's Note

This is something that I wrote for my Writer's Craft class. It was supposed to be a 1200 word short story, but I kind of went over the word limit by 4000 words. So I shortened it, but here is the long, un-edited version. It's also kind of rushed at the end... Anyway, I would love any feedback! 

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