Ok I know the last chapter was really short and kind of boring but the action will start coming in around the 3rd or 4th chapter, but Im going to give a lot of hints throughout the 2nd in order to give you guys an idea of whats going to happen next.
Like I said before, the last chapter was just a starter and I plan on making all of my next chapters at least four pages long.
I really need some feedback, because it's a new story and I dont know if people like it or not. It would be really helpful and I dont care if its critisism either, whatever helps me get a clearer vision of the story would be much apriciated, thanks.
(A/N): Sorry guys, its not edited. :(
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Julias POV
"No. There is no way on this damn earth that Im wearing that to the poetry reading." I exclaimed. She rolled her eyes at me while trying to get me into this really short and slutty dress. "If I go out in public people will think I belong on a street corner!" I yelled. She laughed.
"Come on Jules! Live a little would ya?" She huffed. I groaned.
"I would live a little but I want to be taken seriously, Im not going to a club. ITS. A. POETRY. READING!"
"I know, you've reminded me of that little detail for the last two and a half hours, that Iv'e been doing your hair, makeup and picking out for you this nice dress." She giggled holding up the dress, that due to it's shortness, couldnt really be classified as a dress.
"Im still not wearing that."
"Yeah you are."
"No." I hissed. "I really apriciate the hair and makeup thing, but just because you dont feel comfortable wearing those clothes doesnt mean you can push your lack of self-esteem on me!" I exclaimed. Her eyes widened, then dropped to the floor.
"Wow, thanks." She said. I suddenly realised what I had said.
"OhmiGod! Im so sorry Hayles! I really didnt mean it, Im just nervous." I whispered. She looked up at me, her eyes were sad.
"Is that the reason? Or is that what you really think of me?" She choked out.
"No! God no! Your my best friend and Im just freaking out because I want Blaze to like me sooo much!" I pleaded. "Im really sorry Hale."
She nodded. I breathed in a sigh of reliefe when she hugged me. I really wasnt expecting that because Hayley usually holds grudges. I smiled into her hair, as we stood their.
"Whoa! Girl on girl!" A guys voice came from behind. I spun around to see my sad excuse for a brother, Jackson standing in the doorway, with a smile on his face and a camera in his hand.
"Jackson!" I screamed. "Get out!" .
I chased Jackson all over the house, before he finally retreated to his room and locked the door behind him. I was banging on the door, for God knows how long, before I went back into my room and picked myself out something to wear.
I decided on a black, mini drees, cutting off right above my knee. I just want to point out, it wasnt a slutty dress. Also I decided to wear a pair of black louboutin heels. I had my hair down and Hayley made it look like there was waves, which I was thankfull for, my hair is ususally as flat as a board. At least this style made it look like I had a little volume.
About an hour later, the doorbell rang and ran down the stairs to get it, but Jackson got to the door before I could.
"So your the guy whos taking my little sister out?" He asked trying to act scary. Jackson was only thirteen and was kind of small for his age, Im not saying hes not good looking, because for a thirteen year old and considering hes my brother, hes quite good looking for his age.
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