Soul Sunder White (preview)

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In the beginning there was a God. Don't ask where God came from because we don't know. Maybe he does but why would he tell you.  

God created life-less worlds. He created stars , suns ,rocks and anything he saw fit to create. God was content for a while creating particles,atoms,how they interacted with each other, gravity and every perceivable concept in what we today call physics. Being the master of the universe is great but funny thing about stars and suns are they don't talk back. 

So God created life. He started simple enough with bacteria and small microscopic creatures but he knew that they were just experiments and just the mere building blocks and the pre-design for what we ourselves would one day be called ... Human.

You may of read a book before that says something along the lines of "God made us in his own image." Well that is close but its more along the lines of. "God gave us what he valued being able to do for millennium." Free will and creativity. In other words God gave us souls.

So God created the first human . Ada . Yes Ada Not Adam. Ada was actually the sound that was made when he placed the final bone into his masterpiece. A rib to protect what he deemed the second most important organ in a Humans body. The Heart. This would be the vital center of one's being and emotions.

So thus Ada was born . Ada was a very creative and happy individual. He loved God and God loved him. He missed his master so much while he was off creating the rest of the universe. God saw this and felt the need to create a companion for the man. He did not want to constantly return every time they got lonely so he made a human that could create another human with the help of Ada so that non of his humans would ever be lonely again. God started the woman with the last piece he built Ada with. His rib.

And the sound that was made when he took out the rib was "eve". God introduced them and said Eve this is Ada. The woman attempted to say his name but unfamiliar with gravity her mouth attempted to reply "Ada" but her mouth quickly re-shut and made a " Mmm " sound. Ada was so delighted by his companion's error that he did not have the heart to correct her so he accepted his new name "Adam". And so Adam and Eve lived and loved for a while.

I am sorry to tell you that this is not that same story.  

You may of read a book with some details as to what happened on that planet hence forth. But what was God doing when he was not molding earth. What kind of world did he create beyond our sight. So I am afraid I must apologize if this introduction misguided you into a familiar premise however this isn't a story about good and evil, heaven and hell or even God and the Devil. Ultimately what this story is truly about is for you to decide.

In retrospect, that was the point of the free will part wasn't it?

-Soul Sunder-

I can see a bright light. Its warm and brilliant. I can see it reaching for me. I can see?

Too loud to see and too bright to hear. That does not sound accurate. No , its a perfect description of that piercing ringing sound so loud that I cringe my eyes. I attempt to open my eyes and a blinding light instantly shined giving me a headache numbing all other senses.

What a rude awakening. The smoke is a nice touch too. What kind of hellish world have I woken up into. I ... Who am I ? Shidou? is that what I am called ? What is my purpose in this world ?! *cough cough* Whatever I'm doing here, I need to get up before i suffocate. As I get up from the floor I can barely stand. I can tell that I am unaccustomed to this body even if I did have memory of how I came to be. Does this mean I was just born? No , I knew what smoke was. I can see the sky and know that it is night and those plentiful lights are stars. I don't think these are things a being that is just born into a world knowing. Then again what do I know, I have no memory prior to this event. I can tell one thing though, I talk to myself too much. I wonder if its weird to have full conversations with yourself inside your mind. There is this strange feeling inside me of missing someone or being incomplete. I must find my purpose... I can see the bright blinding light once again , its warm and peaceful and its reaching out to me. I must reach back.

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 21, 2013 ⏰

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