Tip 1

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Include detail in your story.

Example:
The morning sun slowly came up over the Orange and yellow trees. All animals of all types danced and jumped about. The crisp breeze blew through the many leaves, knocking a few of at a time. A single river spread throughout the countryside serving as a water supply for all living things. The variety of fish waltzed through the calm currents of the stream. Clouds moved in and out of the sky, creating many designs in the baby blue sky. As the  sun awoke, the whole world seemed to start buzzing with life.

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