One day, a girl and her friends decided it would be funny to go into the abandoned house which was apparently 'haunted'. There were five of them altogether.
The girl told them it wasnt a good idea, but her friends wanted to prove to her that ghosts didnt really exist. The girl thought differently. They walked into the house. It was cold and dark, with cobwebs and old, musty furniture. There was mould and most probably rats. The whole place was moth eaten. The overall feel of it was that it was very intimidating and put the girl on edge. Her senses on high alert due to the fear. They found a stable sofa and all sat down.
One of the girls friends said she would take the girl to explore, and that they would be back in half an hour.
They stepped into one room, and straight away the girl felt a chill that shook her from head to toe. She told her friend that something wasnt right and that they should leave but her friend just called her a chicken. The girl's friend turned around to talk to her, and the girl saw a knife appear behind the girl. Before she had a chance to scream, the girls friends head was pulled back by her hair and her throat was slit. The girl screamed and ran back to the room.
She told her friends about the incident but they laughed and told her she was joking. She was furious that they wouldnt believe her but she stayed, shaking and curled up in the corner. Another girl got up to try and find a light. She was only out of the room for a minute before they heard a scream. Her friends all ran in and found the girl on the floor, charred black and eaten by flames.
By this point there were only 3 girls left. The girls 2 friends then believed the girl. The place was haunted by ghosts although one girl was more reluctant to agree. By the time they got back into the living room, the plain white wall had a message on, written in the first girls blood.It read '2 at first did not believe, now they both shall never leave'. The girl knew she would not be killed, but she also knew she could not leave her friends. They did not leave each others sight. Finally the ghost struck again. He took one of the girls and as the failed to see hime, he suffocated one of the girls.
Now there was only one left to kill. This was the girl who had been less reluctant to believe. They thought they might be able to escape and the ghost would let her free. They ran out and just before they got to the large iron gates, the girls friend screamed. A bear trap was clasped around her ankle. She knew that was all she had to get through and, although all the dirt got in the wound and her blood was flowing freely leaving a trail, she knew all she had to do was get out and she would be allowed to survive. With the help of the girl they finally got out of the house. The girl had to watch her friend scream in agony as she slowly bled to death.
For the next week the girl was at home. Every night, she had a dream of each girl. Eventually she went crazy, unable to live with the images of the house. She was found the next morning with a slit throat, a burnt torso, a missing foot from a jagged sharp bear trap, and she was suffocated first.
The ghost had come and killed her, due to her weakness.
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btw, i am fully aware that this is not particularly good. I was bored and decided that i had not yet uploaded anything...it took about 5 minutes... :') written about 4 stories, got half way through and decided i didnt like them -.- :L
also if you wouldnt mind leaving a comment... i know the story isnt good.. but like... my style of writing... if that makes any sense at all? :') stories always sound rubbish when i ready them back to myself :/ x
