Just a simple church girl

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Carina Amor Rodriguez

I was with my church just out on visitation. I was visiting houses, giving out leaflets-the usual-until I stopped at a weird looking house. Ok, weird wasn't a good way to describe this house, a better word would probably be mysterious. It looked so different from the other houses around that area, and was very secluded from the rest of the houses. There was a good amount of distance from this house from the rest-quite a walk if you ask me. Everyone had already parted ways to cover more houses/ground, so I decided to go exploring near to the woods. Maybe not the best idea I have had, but I decided to adventure anyway, just cause it's the type of girl I am.

As I creeped up to the house, I kept looking around me in awe. It was so beautiful, but it looked like it held a deep secret for some reason...Anyway! As I went up to the house I knocked on the door and waited. I waited for about 3 minutes and decided to knock one more time. This time the door creaked open...Ok...weird. I'm not the kind of girl to be stupid and go exploring in a house where there could possibly be a serial murderer in, or the kind of girl that screams 'BLOODY MURDER' and trips over absolutely nothing. So what do I go ahead and do instead? That's right just stand there looking like the idiot I am. All that time I could have sworn I felt a pair of eyes burning holes into my back, but when I turned around nothing was there. After a bit I got bored and thought I'd just leave the leaflets and invations in the mail box for whoever lived here.

Just as I was about to turn around and leave, I felt somebody's precence behind me, and suddenly felt hot breath tickle my ear..

"Thanks beautiful" Whoevers voice that was had an immediate affect on me. Shivers were sent up and down my spine. I quickly turned around to discover that whatever or whoever was there, was gone...

I just shook it off thinking I just imagened it and started walking back out of the woods. I could've sworn I heard a voice, but how can someone disappear so quickly? How can 2 simple words have an affect on me? I blushed just thinking someone called me beautiful. Nobody ever gave me a second glance, so this was a first for me. 

As soon as I was out of the woods, I was bombarded with questions, but the only thing I could think of was that voice.

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