Make me [PG]

Crush?!

Hey there! This the first time I have ever written/published something so.. don't judge. If you have any requests for me to squeeze something or an extra character into the story then go ahead and ask! I won't bite, promise! Now go and read till your eyes hurt! :)
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"Haruhi! I couldn't help but notice how cute you looked in that little dress of yours!" Tamaki exclaimed. "Yeah thanks." Haruhi said with a blank face. "Are you coming to Honey's birthday party tonight?" Tamaki asked. "What does it look like? It's not like I have anything better planned" Haruhi replied. They began to walk beside one another on the sidewalks. Passing many apartment complexes including Haruhi's. As they walked by Tamaki's house he stopped and said "OH WAIT! I almost forgot something! Ill be right back haruhi." Tamaki ran inside his house, passed many framed photos of his generations of wealthy family members. He ran upstairs to his room to gather a few extra things as Haruhi waited outside patiently for Tamaki.

Eventually Tamaki came back outside and had something hiding behind his back. As Tamaki approached Haruhi he smiled and she looked back at him with a confused face. "What is that?" She asked curiously. "A birthday present for Honey of course" Tamaki replied. "I thought the gallon bucket of fresh sweet strawberries you gave him was his birthday present." She said acting confused. "It was, but what kind of king would I be if I didn't surprise him with a second part?" He said making a face as if he just told a little 5 year commoner he was going to get a mansion for Christmas.

Once they got to Honey's house where Honey held his birthday party the twins approached them. "What do we have here? Two little love birds walking to a birthday party together, you might as well just hold hands and confess that you like each other. Speaking of which, why haven't you asked her out yet Tamaki?" The twins said being annoyingly nosey. "Huh?! Guys slow down, It's not like that!" Haruhi said trying to convince them that nothing was going on between them. "Are you saying you don't have feelings for me Haruhi?" Tamaki asked beginning to tear up, Making the puppy face. "No! Kinda.. I mean.. Guys can we do this another time please? If we don't go inside soon the mosquitoes are gonna eat me like Honey-senpai eats cake." Haruhi said trying as hard as she could to change the subject. "Fine." The twins grumbled, folding their arms and walking inside with the others.

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HELLO AGAIN MY BEAUTIFUL READERS!!! I hope you enjoyed this first chapter of mine. Sorry if it was too short or too long, if you have any complaints or if you see a mistake in my writing please inform me ASAP so I can correct it. Anyways I should update quite often if not I must be on a trip or dead. See you soon! :)