my brother's best friend (Editing/ on hold)

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This is the editided version of my brothers best friend the last one was ...well sucky :/ the plot was all wrong this one will be similar but it will be more..... correct and set right i guess it will just be better haha :3 well here it is oh btw this is a tester please tell me what you think ;)

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Caroline’s P.O.V 

hello my name is caroline, i have one very over protective brother, a gothic emo best friend, two other best friends that are irrespirable, twin friends that love pranks and a bad boy player that loves to make me blush. 

I have dark brown wavy hair and amber eyes i am average height maybe a bit shorter i have a curvy body but not fat i have a honey gold tan skin colour not dark but not pale i have french tip nails that i love i’m not girly but i’m not a tomboy.

Tomorrow was the first day of senior year my brother and i are both the same age you see i’m adopted i lived in Australia until i was 14 then my parents died they were murdered in a mugging. 

Now i live with my brother and his crazy family going to my senior year tomorrow  of course my idiotic brother was down stair playing punk rock music with his 

band as hard as he could, i walk down stairs i was only wearing a tank top shorts and high socks that had candy shapes on them yum i love sugar and lollies and candy. 

I get to the basement which means going down two lots of stairs which means me being in my incredibly tired moody and pissed off state i was ready to kill... well not really i mean he is my lift to school, anyway i open the door and it is so much louder then when the door is closed i run over to the power plug and yank out the extension cord which was connected to all the amps isn’t that dangerous? i quickly snap out of my thoughts when my brother, Drake yells “what the hell caroline!” as he stopped playing his drums

my brother has messy dark brown hair he puts in a with hazel eyes he was wearing a chunk no captain chunk T-shirt and dark blue jeans his skin tone is lighter than mine though his isn’t and gold, sun kissed i guess 

“oh sorry am i interrupting hello school is tomorrow and i need S-L-E-E-P sleep” i say popping the P 

“but we have to practice for you gig” one of the twins say “yeah and its not like we are coming early” The other says 

The twins are They have blond hair that is parted on the right for one and left for the other and is shaded with green, they keep the bangs out of his eyes with red bobby pins. They have green eyes that show small hints of blue their ears are also pierced 3 on each ear. They also wear black nail polish on their finger nails. their names are  Rai and robin their completely identical if they didn’t part their hair on different sides and wore their necklace Rai has a key robin has a lock without them no one would tell which is which. rai plays base while robin play guitar 

“yes you are i need a lift!!” i say turning to my brother 

the twins look at each other and smirk then come towards me they stand each side 

“hay Rai don’t you think Caroline looks cute in her high socks and short shorts “ robin says  while looking at my butt Rai looks down at my but than looks back a robin 

“nah robin i think the tank top is better i mean look if we pull it up a bit we can see her belly button” Rai says and pulls my tank top up a bit 

“oh yeah your right” “what do you think cole?, Drake?” they say the last part in sync 

at this point i’m blushing like a strawberry and paralyzed from the shock my brother is going to kill me he is super over-protective i look over at him and he is shaking from anger 

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