The Story of a new Creepypasta Girl

Before we start the story, this is my own character so that no else has, as far as I know. Good constructive criticism is welcome, flames are not. 

Onto explaining my twisted story

This is a new creepypasta that popped into my head, showing the origin of a young teenager always having her headphones. She gets into trouble with the meanest yet hottest girl of the University. She leaves the girl in the hall when she doesn't see the point of a fight and walks away after tearing the mean girl apart with her words. Winning most of the population's respect for which enrages her and plots her revenge. 

How will headphone girl come to terms with this?

Usually some awesome well-deserved revenge and getting the cute guy to boot. Well, you shall look and see.

This is going under a massive rewrite, please excuse me! The pic above is what I imagine her to look like, it may change over time.