A clone within the ranks

Chapter 1 Clone sc74 reporting for duty

I woke up on a planet that was covered by water, I was being dragged by some other men in white armour with blasters. I was put in a room to be tested on, or so they say. One of the men entered and said "sc74 get up, you've been sent here to fight" I asked "then...why (COUGH!) I'm I...here" my fellow clone said "you have a...malfunction...you're chip to fallow orders has some how not been planted. I'm here to fix it." I stood up walked up to him kneed him in the gut, grabbed his key card and blaster and locked him in there. I walked out to see a person standing there waiting for him. She asked "was the execution successful?" I answered of the bat so she didn't get suspicious "yes he struggled but I think I did it. If not contact me and I'll finish him." So I marched of and finally made it to the ranks,I grabbed my gun, a sniper rifle, then I got in my group and the man next to me said "sc74 is that you?!" I answered "shhh be quite!" He nodded and whispered to me "I thought they'd execute you!" "Yeah well they let me off the hook, now shut up the captain coming." Captain Rex the leader of or group marched by we all saluted him and boarded onto the ship into battle.
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We reached the battle field, and we all ran with the captain out of the transport ship and I ran up a hill to a big rock and set up my gun. The droids were coming up the hill in big ranks, so I grabbed one of the grenades given to us. I threw it and blew up a whole army, I shot some more battle droids and after about 1 minute, droidikas started rolling up. I try'd to shoot them in there rolling form but the shoot bounced of there tough shells. They shot half our army down, they finally saw me and I started to come at me, I try'd to run but I tripped, right as they were upon me a man with a wight blade know as a lightsaber, jumped and sliced the droidikas into pieces. He helped me up and asked me if am ok I nodded and we started to destroyed all the others. Until I was shot...I survived but I blacked out. I opened my eyes and saw that nobody was there, I looked up In the sky to see nothing,so we must have won...but they didn't check to see if I was alive...I looked to see a tree that I did not see before, I ran up to it with my rifle too see a man under it as I got closer I noticed that it was the Jedi! I started sprinting to see if he was ok. I reached him and asked "sir! Are you ok!" He stood up gave me his brown cloak and his lightsaber. He said in a weak voice, "you...must....s-save... you're f-fellow c-clones" and with that he died... I stood up and looked for something to help me survive.

                  End of chapter 1