SLoU Rewrite info

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Hello everyone! I hope you all have been well. Recently I got over a cold. No!!! Sick on Winter Break! And my Step-father has had my laptop for the past two days. We've been at my grandma's house and he only has a computer (haha I conveniently replaced his laptop with my computer, now it's mine :P ).

Okay enough stalling. Recently I finished the first chapter of SLoU (Rewrite) and well... it needs major editing. The beginning of it I'm quite proud of though. And if any of you were wondering, no it's not the same as this one. The first chapter of the original story is only two pages, so far the rewrite is three and a half. But the dialogue is not sophisticated enough (sue me I don't have that well of vocabulary). Don't really sue my though, haha that'd be embarrassing. 

Anyway back to the topic. The rewrite is now third person, Usha's perspective, but I'm thinking about adding a chapter in which Clarinda is the perspective. Yeah... Also it's going to be in North Carolina, but I'm going to make up my own town/city because well I don't know about many cities in NC other than what I've learned in history. Thanks to SlienceDoGood1 for the idea.

The updates are going to be slow because I'm not going to have anytime other then the weekends. But I'll try to write more often. The cover is probably going to be the same though unless anyone wants to make me one haha... Anyhow if you have read the original one well... you might be lost. The first chapter is kind of different from the whole story. It was in a dream of my own and I was thinking, "Oh yesh! That shall go in SLoU!" You all will understand later.

Anyway I'm thinking about updating in the next month but do you all want me to update once I finish writing it or do you all want me to write the first 3 or 5 chapters and then post a different chapter once a week. The latter would let me update more often. Okay if anyone has questions then you can comment or send me a message.

Have a great New Year! :) (Get it? Because it's New Years Eve... yeah I suck at jokes.)

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