Not long before I turned sixteen I died. A 40 ton truck hit me and before I knew it I was gone.
All that surrounded me was darkness and I had no sense of consciousness. It was like having one of those dreamless nights. You feel like you can't breath and there's a heaviness in your chest. Before you know it, it's the next day as if so much time went by within a short moment.
That's death, your dead and then the next moment your awake. Not in your bed of course, but in a place where everything you once believed is shattered right before your eyes. Nothing seems real, but that's what makes it a whole lot of hell worse.
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Hey guys! So this is my first book and im really looking forward to making it. I honestly don't know when I will be uploading or when this will be completed.
Truthfully I was just sitting on my bed (or couch can't remember) when I suddenly had a story in mind! This always happens to me and I feel like I have to hurry before I forget about it.
Sometimes it even happens in school, I have to pull my notebook out and my teacher will just be staring at me like . . . What r u doing? Lol jk jk. That doesn't happen, but I really do think of random stories all the time. I have like 15 stories I have to write. Ok, fine 10 the most, but really I don't know.
Anyways if your really wondering im a noob writer. I mean I did just say it was my first book right? So yea I don't know how many reads this book will get or how good of a writer I am.
I'm not saying that my stories will have a lot of grammar errors cause they won't. Im pretty tight when it comes to punctuation. What im trying to say is that I will gladly accept any critique and advice from ANYONE. As long as it's nice and not rude. So thanks for stopping by!!!
~ Olivia OsWelled
(btw thats not my real name)
Oh! One more thing!!! How well did I do in making paragraphs? Thanks!
-COMING SOON IN 2017
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Aliza
Mystery / ThrillerNot long before I turned sixteen I died. A 40 ton truck hit me and before I knew it I was gone. All that surrounded me was darkness and I had no sense of consciousness. It was like having one of those dreamless nights. You feel like you cant brea...