This is my first piece i am 17 a writer from south carolina please enjoy
"Ambreose, run!" Seth screamed at the top of his voice. I knew it, I thought, John was a vampire. I ran as far as i could before i felt the jacket i was wearing being grabbed. "What the..." I cried out as i felt the searing pain run through my neck. This is it, I thought , The moment of my death. I woke up in the tower of a strange room. the room had a strange glow to it that allowed it to look creepy and mysterious.
"Wait a second here," i shouted. the reason for this was that i could see as far as the ground of a million foot tower and all the people along it. I touched the side of my neck and there they were: the two marks that indicated that i had been drunken from and i knew now what must have happened. "He tasted the wiches blood in my viens and knew that i was too valuable to throw away," i said to myself favoring the sound of my words. They were like tiny bells tinkling in the moonlight. I was now a vampire and there was only one thing to do. I had to find John and have him explain to me the reasons for what he had done to me and why he had wanted me dead......
I ran around the corner perched myself on the towers rooftop, and waited to see John. About ten minutes later there he was walking around the left side of the tower stalking a small defenceless girl. "John," I screamed,"Stop. Dont do that or i will kill you very slowly." "Wow," John screamed to me,"Someones growing up fast." The next thing i knew John was standing right in front of me. I tensed ready for the fight. "Who are you to tell me who not to hunt? You are my creation not the opposite way around," He screamed in my face as i watched in horror at his hand reaching for my throat.
"Don't!" I heard in the background. I turned to see a slim and beautiful woman with auburn hair and a slim athletic body. "If you kill him i'll run away," the beautiful woman threatened. "Ambreose, meet my daughter, Serefina, and thank her for you still being alive," John said to me.
He let go of me! I couldnt beleive it. "Serefina, what a wonderful name," i said coughing up blood. "Thanks. You might want to go out and feed," she said as the blood started flowing out of my lips. "I think you are right," i replied, " could you teach me? im kinda new to this." "I would be honored to," she accepted.
We walked around the corners to see if there were any humans around. There wasnt, so we just walked around talking about her past. "So why did you rescue me from your father?" I asked. "I saved you because you have witches blood within your soul," she replied taking a pause,"and because you are a work of art and i like you." I could just see it now if I had been human my cheeks would be a burning red and i would have been dinner for the second time in the last two days, I thought. "I also like the ways your eyes blend in with the night, the way your hair stands on end when ever you see me. Yes, I seen the way you looked at me when we were on top of the tower. You wanted me. One thing you should know is that i want you too and there is not one damn thing my father could do. One vampire is not to kill another vampire's creation."
The look i gave her was totally unresponsive. "I turned you. Not my father, me. You were in deaths grip and i rescued you." This was the moment when a human teenager chose to walk around the corner of the castle. "Now Im gonna show you how it is to be a vampire......"
She dragged me to the ground with her and we stalked the young woman. "Why must will kill when we feed?" Serifina looked at me then laughed with a voice that could only be described as chiming bells.
"We kill because without the last drop of life from them we will have no life. we were created my Makare and her sister Maharet, the first true vampires. they had a rule in the beginning where you must not kill your prey. vampires died every where around the world so they adapted to the hunt. the kill gave you the preys last breath of life."
She touches my chest then continues, "We breath its just that our breathing is just too fast for the world to see. we must take the breath from this woman to survive." she sprints to the young woman and sinks her fangs into her neck. she drains her then turns toward me. "Now you know what you must do. you are a killer so kill for you will not live very long without the kill."
"Ambreose, you must kill her," i hear out of the corner of my mind. I am usually the kind of person that acts on instinct so i balled my hands into a fist and punched through her chest. she wasnt dead but slipped to the ground. somehow i knew she would heal then come after me. i ran with impossible speed into the street and to where my brother and i had been attacked. Before i got there i seen the lump in the grass. "Oh no," I cried falling to my knees at my brothers death place. "You bastards, you killed him!" i scream. i hold him close to me rocking back and forth. "I promised to protect you and now you are dead." Tears stream out of my eyes. i remember all the times we had played. All the girls and guys we had argued with and the fights that i had broken up. His life was far more important then my own. All his vitality and life had been drained from him. Taken away from him like he was nothing. i vowed revenge against the evil monster that had done this to him. i vowed to kill that bastard John and his daughter.
