After the final draft and revisions there may be a few changes in characters and even the title. This is my first story on here so i hope you guys like it feel free to comment on it and give your opinions. This is Not a final story it is a DRAFT, completely open to constructive criticism. Lets get started. Ill write the first 4 chapters to get started, then a new chapter there after.
Character List
TANYA REEVES:TARAJI HENSON
DWIGHT HARRISON:RYAN GOSLING
SARAH DOTSON: AMANDA SIGFRIED
GARRETT MAIN: MARK WALBERG
TAZJA CLARK: MEAGAN GOOD
ILL LIST MORE CHARACTERS AS THEY COME:-)
CHAPTER 1
ITS THE END OF ANTHER DAY AT THE HOTEL AND TANYA COULDN'T WAIT TO GET HOME.SHE FIGURED SHE'D STOP AND GET GAS BEFORE SHE WENT HOME. TO GET THE USUAL YOU KNOW CIGARETTES, BLUNTS AND SOME KIND OF LIQUOR TO DRINK. SOMETHING IN HER MIND TOLD HER TO PLAY THE LOTTERY. SHE PLAYED THE MEGA MILLIONS, PAID FOR HER THINGS AND WENT ON TO PUMP HER GAS. JUST STANDING THERE SHE STARTED THINKING ABOUT HOW IT COULD BE IF SHE HIT BIG. LAUGHING THE THOUGHT OFF, SHE PUT THE PUMP BACK AND GOT IN HER CAR TO GO DRIVE HOME.
SHE WALKED THROUGH THE DOOR, LOOKING TO SEE IF HER LIVE-IN BOYFRIEND DWIGHT WAS HOME. THEY'VE BEEN TOGETHER ALMOST TEN YEARS, NO THOUGHT OF MARRIAGE FOR MULTIPLE REASONS BUT THEY HAD NO KIDS EITHER. THEY SHARED AN APARTMENT TOGETHER IN VEGAS, NOTHING FANCY SIMPLE 2 BEDROOM CONDO. THEY HAD AN HOME OFFICE SINCE DWIGHT WAS AN SELF EMPLOYED CONTRACTOR AND SHE DID MOST OF THE PAPERWORK FOR HIS BUSINESS. IT OVERLOOKED THE DESERT, BUT STILL BY ALL ACCOUNTS STILL A GORGEOUS VIEW. SHE'S CALLING IS NAME AND TO NO AVAIL AND NO ANSWER. SHE WALKS TO THE KITCHEN AND SHE FINDS A NOTE ON THE FRIDGE.***GOT NEW JOB OFFER OUT OF TOWN, WENT TO TALK TO LAND OWNER . ILL BE GONE ALL WEEKEND SORRY SWEETIE LOVE YOU D.*** SHE THOUGHT IT WAS ODD HE LEFT A NOTE WHEN THEY WOULD USUALLY TEXT. SO SHE TRIED TO CALL HIM AND IT WENT TO HIS VOICE MAIL, SHE SENT A TEXT AFTER ASKING TO CALL. WHEN THERE WAS NO RESPONSE FROM D SHE DECIDED SHE WAS GOING TO GO WITH A FRIEND. SHE TEXTED HER FRIEND TAZJA **HEY MZ LADY FREE FOR WKEND WHATSUP? SHE TOSSED HER PHONE ON HER BED, SAT DOWN ON HER BED IN FRONT OF CLOSET. SHE TOOK A DEEP BREATH AND OPENED THE DOORS. SOON AFTER SHE DID TAZJA TEXTED BACK WITH ***BITCH BOUT TIME YOU GOT AT ME LOL WHAT NO DWIGHT TO RUIN MY NIGHT? LOL ILL BE THERE AT 8.*** SHE LAUGHED TO HERSELF YEA...SHE STARTED GOING THROUGH HER CLOTHES LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO WEAR. AT THE SAME TIME SHE KEPT THINKING OF THE NOTE DWIGHT HAD LEFT FOR HER. SHE JUST COULDNT UNDERSTAND WHY HE HAD LEFT THE NOTE AND WHY SOME REASON HES NOT ANSWERING HIS PHONE. WAS SHE OVER THINKING THINGS? WAS HE HIDING SOMETHING? SHE PUT IT OUT OF HER MIND AN BEGAN TRYING ON OUTFIT AFTER OUTFIT. TIME FLEW BY AND TAZJA EVEN CAME EARLY.
KNOW, KNOCK,KNOCK TAZJA INHALED BLUNT SMOKE
TAZJA: HEY GURL OPEN UP
TANYA: YEA, IM SO GLAD TO SEE YOU (AS SHE OPENED THE DOOR)
TAZJA: GURL ME TOO LETS GET YOU TOGETHER (AS SHE WALKED THROUGH THE DOOR
TANYA: YOU ALWAYS KNOW BEFORE I TELL YOU. (LAUGHED TOGETHER)
TAZJA: I KNOW YOU REALLY DONT HAVE STYLE PASSED THAT HOTEL UNIFORM OF YOURS.
TAZJA OFFERED BLUNT TO TANYA
TANYA: SHUT UP (THEY LAUGHED TOGETHER)
TAZJA:HEY I HAVE AN IDEA..WHY DONT WE GO AS COCO CHANEL LADIES? .
TANYA LAUGHS
TANYA: MAYBE WHAT ARE YOU WEARING?
TAZJA: I DUNNO SOMETHING OUT OF YOUR CLOSET (SHE SMILES REALLY BIG)
TANYA: YOU DRY CLEAN IT
TAZJA: SHE LAUGHED) YEA YEA I KNOW WE GO OVER THIS ALL THE TIME. THEN I GOT YOU AND YOU GOT ME. (THEY LAUGH) GO GET IN THE SHOWERED LEAVE IT ALL TO ME TONIGHT. ILL DO HAIR AND MAKE UP AND FIGHT WITH YOUR CLOSET TO FIND YOU SOMETHING SEXY ENOUGH TO HANG WITH ME.
THEY LAUGH
TANYA: WHATEVER.
TANYA GETS IN THE SHOWER AFTER A LONG DAY AND TAZJA GETS STARTED LAYNING OUT HER UTENSILS NEEDED FOR APPLYING MAKEUP AND CURLING HAIR. AT LAST SHE STARTED LOOKING HER CLOSET AND IN THE VERY BACK WAS A LONG SLEEVE BLACK LACE MINI DRESS. SHE PULLED THAT OUT AND WAITED FOR TANYA TO GET SHOWERING. ONCE SHE WAS OUT , SHE RELUCTENTLY PUT ON THE DRESS.
TANYA: TAZJA, I HAVENT WORN THIS IN YEARS. YOU DONT THINK ITS TOO TIGHT OR SHORT?
TAZJA: REALLY? TIGHT? SHORT? SIT DOWN LETS FINISH THIS PROCESS.
TAZJA DID TANYA'S MIDLONG SANDY BROWN HAIR IN A MESSY SEXY UP BUN WITH A FEW STRAINS OF HAIR FALLING AROUND HER FACE AND AND UPON HER BARE SHOULDERS. SHE PICKED OUT RED MARY JANE PEEP TOES HEELS, SINCE HER MAKE UP WAS SOFTREDSWITH RED LIP GLOSS. TANYA BEGAN TO ROLL THEM BLUNTS FOR THE RIDE AND TAZJA WAS MIXING THEIR FIRST DRINK OF THE NIGHT.
TANYA: ALRIGHT WHERE ARE WE GOING TONIGHT?
TAZJA; HAVE YOU BEEN TO THAT NEWPLACE DOWNTOWN?
TANYA: THE NEW CLUB OR HOTEL?
TAZJA;THE NEW CLUB IN THE NEW HOTEL ACTUALLY
TANYA: BUT I HEARD IT HAS EXPENSIVE ASS HELL. BUT SHIT WE CAN GO I GOT A LIL CHANGE TO MESS WITH. HEY YOU THINK ITS FUNNY THAT D LEFT ME A HAND WRITTEN NOTE INSTEAD OF TEXTING ME?
TAZJA: ABOUT WHAT?
TANYA:HES CHECKING INTO NEW PROPERTY HE MAY BE CONTRACTED TO WORK ON. HE'LL BE GONE ALL WEEKENDIT SAID.
TAZJA; HAVE YOU CALLED HIM OR GOT AHOLD OF HIM?
TANYA:NO.... NO ANSWER FROM HIM, NO CALL OR TEXT.
TAZJA: INTERESTING...YOU KNOW I NEVER LIKED HIM. MAYBE HE HAS SOME BROAD UP IN HOTEL DOING WHAT IVE BEEN TELLING YOU TO DO FOR YEARS. SHE LAUGHS.
TANYA: WHATEVER ( TANYA LIGHTS BLUNT, HITS A FEW TIMES AND PASSED IT TO TAZJA WHO HANDS TANYA HER COCKTAIL. ) SO HAVE YOU BEEN TO THIS NEW CLUB YET?
TAZJA:A FEW TIMES AND I LOVE IT. HELL MAYBE YOU'LL FIND SOMEONE THERE AND FORGET ABOUT D. (SMILES BIG AT TANYA)
THEY FINISHED THEIR DRINKS AND HEADED TO THE CLUB. THEY PARKED A COUPLE BLOCKS AWAY SO THEY WOULDNT GET BACKED IN BY SOME IDIOT.THEY START HEADING TO CLUB AND NOTICE THE LINE TO GET WAS NOT MOVING. ALTHOUGH THEY GO STAND AND WAIT TO GET LET IN WHEN ONE OF THE BOUNCERS COME OUT AND SAID "NO MORE ALLOWED IN TONIGHT". TAZJA WAS NOT HAPPY, TANYA SEEMED INDIFFERENT ABOUT IT. TAZJA GETS OUT HER CELL AND STARTS DIALING AWAY AND YELLING INTO HER PHONE, TANYA STEPS TO THE SIDEWALK AND LOOKS FOR HER CIGARETTES IN HER PURSE. SHE FINDS THE CIGARETTES, STILL SEARCHING FOR LIGHTER WHEN A WHITE GUY IN BLACK SUIT COMES OUT THE DOOR. TAZJA STILL ON HER PHONE ATTEMPTING TO GET IN, THE WHITE STRANGER WALKED UP TO TANYA ASKED IF SHE NEEDED A LIGHT, SURPRISED BUT NOT SCARED SHE ACCEPTED. THEY BEGAN LIGHT CONVERSATION AND HE MADE HER LAUGH, SHE THANKED HM FOR THE LIGHT AND WAS TELLING HIM GOODBYE. WHEN HE INTRODUCED HIMSELF AS GARRETT, NEW HOTEL AND CLUB OWNER. TANYA STOOD WITH HESITATION.
TANYA: WHATEVER? ARE YOU SERIOUS?
GARRETT:GARETT, GARRETT MAIN PLEASURE TO MEET YOU.
HE HELD OUT HIS HAND HAND TO SHAKE HERS, SHE STILL COULDN'T BELIEVE IT, SO SHE CALLED HIS BLUFF.
TANYS: WELL IF YOUR THE OWNER YOU CAN GET US IN RIGHT? SHE LAUGHED
GARRETT: ABSOLUTELY, ILL LET YOU IN IF YOU COME IN AS MY DATE?
GARRETT HELD OUT HISHAND FOR HER TO TAKE, SHE BLUSHED BUT SHE DID TAKE HIS HAND TO GO INSIDE THE CLUB...
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Priceless
RomanceWhat began with passion and love seems to be laced with lies and infidelities as time progresses. He lied, she cheated vice versa, he said she said with reality and truth slowly coming to light.
