No More [Naruto Fanfiction]

chapter 1

*drip* why does the village hate me
*drip* why can't I just be like normal people and die after being tortured almost daily

(After a few minutes of of heavy bleeding and sad thoughts Naruto passes out)

A FEW HOURS LATER

Naruto woke up and realized that he was laying on the ground in a dark ally surrounded by the old Luke worm blood that was seeping out of his body but under him it felt like his blood was moving to a drain even though the drain was at an upward slope it was like something was guiding it somewhere

Having nothing better to do Naruto decided to follow the almost sentient seeming blood that was slithering to the drain, once he made it to the drain the cover was loose and some blood was draining down and so he tore the lid from the ground and went down making sure to cover the drain with its lid to keep others from finding it and him

(In the sewer)

The blood was making a clear path to a small groove I'm the wall of the sewer and a single drop was on a small Pebble on the ground, Naruto went over and picked the Pebble up and the drop of blood went sailing to a small divot it the wall that was the exact shape of the Pebble taking the clear hint he put the Pebble into the wall and waited. After a few seconds the groove became deeper and swung open revealing a dim cave like corridor with snake tracks on the floor the blood then went sailing forward and into the darkness

Since following the blood seemed to be the only real option Naruto walked into the darkness and after an hour or so of walking in circles and hitting dead ends he finally found the now puddle of blood surrounding a scroll with careful and neat writing on the cover and beside it was a list  with names chakra natures and some kekki genkai

Under the list of specimens there was a map of the compound and a line of hand signs, so Naruto practiced the signs and on his tenth try he did them  flawlessly and the map started to glow until it was smoking  and out of no where Naruto knew exactly where everything in the compound was and knew every twist and turn of the corridors as well as what every room was for and how to use them he then destroyed the physical map so no one else could use it

After further investigation in the room he was in, Naruto came upon an uncompleted jutsu to make the compound into a pocket dimension. But what really amazed Naruto was that he understood each and every thing about how and why the jutsu failed. You see the compound was just to big to be made into a pocket dimension without a huge amount of chakra and clearly the the one who was trying didn't possess the correct quantity of chakra or the density required to pull it off, but luckily for Naruto not only did he have an abundance of chakra but it was also extraordinarily dense even more so then the thirds chakra in his prime.

(Note I mean his chakra was denser
not he had more of it he has about high anbu chakra due to the kyubi and Uzumaki+namekaze blood)

So again after practicing the hand signs he was able to turn the compound into his very own pocket dimension, but in the process he used  nearly all of his chakra to make it he made a dimensional gate to about a half a mile to his house where he lives with his brat sister and two patents that refuse to acknowledge Naruto even if he was the oldest  his parents baby his sister because she is the jinchuriki of the nine tails

hello there how are you :3 as you probably have seen I have been trying to add more punctuation and correct some of my Grammar and spelling as well as adding more detail to my story
Also for those who are worried that Naruto will be an orochimaru double don't worry he will be more like a kabuto after he becomes orochimaru 2.0 but with out the snake on the stomach he will have the sound fours abilities except for tayuya and he will have a rinesharingan but It's gonna be special he will have kushimaru's bone kekki genkai and kabuto's cellular regeneration technique and dead soul as well (A kabuto jutsu)
As you can see op will be and under statement with this Naruto I can wait :D