1995

B.I.R.T.H.D.A.Y

It was January first 1995 and Elise was turning 18 she was so excited it was a blistering hot day so she went for a swim in the local pool with her big sister Rebecca a few years ago their mother and father died in a terrible fire anyway back to Elise's birthday she got out of the pool and noticed a hot guy staring at her so she builds up her courage and walks over to him she speaks with her soft sweet voice and says "hey I saw you looking at me I was wondering why" he opens his mouth and yawns then says with his deep brooding voice " baby I was look at your beautiful light green eyes that sparkle in the sun" Jeremy gets up and grabs her arm and lightly tugs her to guide her in his direction at first she is startled but then for some odd reason she felt safe and protected she followed him when all of sudden she felt chills own her spin like she always did when something terrible was about to happen she pulled her hand back in fear he turn around fast and frightens her enough to make her fall and hit her head on a corner and start bleeding all of a sudden Jeremys face was doing weird things all of a sudden he was gone in flash all she saw was a blur . then Rebecca comes in she rushes Elise to the hospital she had to stay there over night because she had a concussion it she has about 10 o'clock Elise is still awake while her sister was in a deep sleep when Jeremy enters the room in a hurry and the fear in his face scared her

hi my name is ebony I live on the gold coast and love horror I'm not the best writer but I do try.

the reason birthday has full stops as it is an acronym for. blood ,insecurity ,resurrection ,torture ,helpfulness ,death ,abomination and youth all these things will be shown throughout the story

sorry if my parts are to short and its not punctuated properly or at all its hard for someone with brain problems to write so much will update as quick as I can maybe once or twice a week maybe once a fortnight as busy schedule