Dont let go a bajancandian fanfiction

Hey guys so this is going to be a re wright of my first book "don't let go" because I did not like it hope you all like it!

Erins pov
I had just moved to LA for Boston to take up YouTube and acting and gaming! I moved here with one of my best friends Sam
"SAM I THINK I FOUND AN AMAZING HOUSE" I yelled
"Really??"she asked
"Ya look!" I responded
"THAT'S THE ONE!!! Thank god we can move out of the fucking hotel it sucks here" she said with joy
-TIME SKIP TO WHEN THEY MOVED IN!!!!-
"This is an amazing house!!" I yelled "you wanna go meet our neighbors" I asked
"Sure" she yelled. after meeting 2 family's we went up to our last neighbors house and knocked on the door
"Coming" a voice yelled from inside "hello" he man yelled. he looked like he was about 18 that's how old I was!
"H...hi" I said "I'm e....rin"
"I'm sam" Sam said
"I'm Ty"
"Nice to meet you" Sam and I said with a smile. I was always the shy one when I was younger I guess it has not changed at all!
"Ill get the others, hold on" Ty said "guys come here!' s
He yelled. their was alot of them all looking about 18-19 years old but one stood out to me the most be had black hair and brow eyes he was amazing and all I could do was think about him. but then I was interrupted by some one yelling at the top of their lungs
"Hiiiiiii!!!! I'm Adam nice to meet you guys!!!!!!"
"Good to meet you to..." we said quietly
"I'm Jason"
I'm Jerome"
"I'm mitch" ahh mitch the one I was thinking about he has a lovely voice
"I'm Ssundee" (can't spell his name sorry guys)
"And I'm quinten"
"Nice to meet you all" Sam said
"Ya we should all get together one day this week and have a cook out at out place"
"Sounds good!" they yelled. and Sam an I walked away after saying our good byes
"I'm going to go upstairs an watch some of that YouTube joint" I said useing a bajancanadian saying
"Ok I'm going to cook up some dinner!" Sam said
"Ok" I responded and went on my phone to bajancanadians page and found a vid
" Hey doods it's mitch or bajancanadian here...." the screen said that voice could it be the guy I saw next door no way it is......
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Hope you guys in joyed ill be posting more soon! Ps ill have longer chapters soon!