DO NOT KILL ME!!! PLEASE I BEG MERCY!!!!!
I just don't understand where Teddy is. That is my criticism, where is Teddy? Shouldn't he live with Harry since Tonks and Remus (RIP) died? Harry was his godfather so he should be with him? Other than that HP is basically perfect (other than the fact it's barely JK Rowling's book) and don't fight me on that, you will lose.
