This is my first story so don't hate. I would like tips if you guys/girls don't mind.
Also I will accept team RWBY and team JNPR request and sometimes a coco x violet smut but no gay smut I'm sorry
Just a btw (TEXT) = not out loud
Blake's POV
* sniff sniff * I smell food. I guess yang made us breakfast, I hope it's her famous heart shaped pancakes. ( I walk in the kitchen yawning only to find out yangs clothes are no were to be found)
Hey babe, were are your clothes (my face blood red) (she walks over sawing her hips in a suductive manor) (she whispers I'm my hear ) I thought after breakfast I could so you my naughty side. (As she slaps my ass making me jump a little). (I start to rub her clit making her moan), I will let you do what ever you want( I said in a sexy tone). (I stop rubbing her pussy only to eat my food only to be put in a marriage carry and be escorted to are room). Yang puts me on our bed and trails kisses from my neck to my jeans witch she some how managed to unbutton with her teeth wile rubbing my nipples , I can't lie it felt like she had practice but that's besides the point. (Once she managed to get my skinny jeans off she noticed that I was soaking wet from seeing her amazingly curved body), Were you that happy to see me you naughty kitty cat you. (My face turned blood red in a heart beat) I guess so I said nervously, yang I'm not sure about this I've been told the first time hurts WHAT your cherry still lives (yang sounded surprised) well I guess that means I'm gonna need so help from a toy (she pulls a strap on out from under the bed) say hello to my little
friend ( she said in an attempt to make me laugh... she did not succeed) (my anxiety was through the roof) alright let's get this started (I said with struggle) she replays with take a deep breath so I did * inhales* yang thrusted hard. AHHHH i shed a tear. (My beautiful wife looks at me with remorse) are you ok babe, I nod just keep going after about the third thrust my pussy starts to bleed, I no longer hold a v card but we are not even close to being done.
About 30 minutes of thrusting I finally cum
Yang takes off the strap on and and ask me to find a toy to use on her
So I chose something I'm best at using my own two fingers I pounce on her my momentum takes us to the ground we giggle together, are you ready( I ask ) she says yes. I push my 2 fingers in her wet slimy cunt. She moans loudly, I found the G spot but just to spice it up I pulled a two sided power adjusting vibrator from under our bed I slide it in to my pussy then into hers. Just for the fun I kick it to full blast, the feeling was amazing we cam on the ground after what like 25 minutes of just laying by each outer waiting to see who would cum first , i won yang is like a firework, she has the restraining ability of a 2 year old we shower and put pjs on then kiss each other good night
So guys tell me what you think would could improve in my writing
Peace out
