true mate a bella and aro story

HAY PEOPLE THIS I MY FIRST STORY SO CUT ME SOME SLACK SO HERE IT GOES.

Third person pov.

As bella pulled up to the cullen house she felt a werd feeling that some thing terrible what's going to happen. She did not think much of it.

Bellas pov.

I can't wait to see edward's face when he ses the surprise I have planed for him. I was so happy that alice said she would help. EDWARD I yell as I open the door to see edward makeing love to Tanya.EDWARD HOW COULD YOU I yelled. I watch as fagward got pants on. Bella your not as good as Tanya in many expecially in bed. And look at your face your hideous the only reason I let this dating thing going on as long as I did it because you're immune to my gift. well im sorry that I dont laugh the loudest or I never want to be alone I'm sorry I'm not perfect for you why don't you and your whole family just stay out of my life and I'll stay out of yours.

OK SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND DONT BE afraid to criticize don't worry about it oh and um I added a part of a song in this if anyone can guess it that I will take your suggestions on the next chapter PLZ VOTE I JUST WANT 1 per chappy