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Chapter 24: Tension On The Field
Lilly's POV
The sun reflected off of my G4G's, and Mitch kept glancing at me. I was getting suspicious, but I
ignored it. "Let's go near the water. I want to feel the temperature." he claimed. I knew what he was
planning. I went anyways, hypnotized by him. We neared the shore. I slipped off my wedges, and
my shirt and shorts. My black string bikini was ready. I prepared for the worst. He smiled at me, and
I tip-toed towards the shore, still slightly afraid. Then, I felt his strong hand wrap around my bare
stomach, and I was in the ocean. I surfaced, and he jumped in after me. I giggled, and I couldn't
touch the bottom. I swam to him, and clung to his body. He could easily touch, being the giant
he was. He held me, and I smiled. He dunked me under, and came under with me. His lips met
mine, and I almost wished I could freeze time. A kiss under water. Typical hopless romantic Mitch.
I surfaced, and clung to his body again. I almost squealed when I felt something brush against
my legs. Mitch laughed hysterically. I smacked him, and he pretended to let me go. I clung to
his body, my hand grasping his abs. He laughed even harder at this and I shook my head. He
looked at me, and smiled a goofy, crooked, grin.
"I love you." he whispered.
"I love you too." I whispered back. Our lips met, and I wish I had a remote in my hand to really
freeze time.
Mitch's POV
A/N We're back tracking a little, to the night Mitch foudn out about her past and Pewds was all
hittin on her at the beach and they left and blah get ze peecture? GOOD!)
I watch as Felix flirts with his eyes. I knew it was him, but I didn't want to say anything. I didn't need
to say anything. He was my sworn enemy. He tried to take everything from me.
~Flashback~
Mitch and Felix, best friends in third grade, Jerome not having moved to New Jersey yet. A/N OK
before I get comments, I know Mitch was the one who moved to NJ but I'm not exactly doing this
to make it accurate) We sat in Math, passing notes and talking about video games. Then, the
topic switched. I mentioned this cute girl, Marzia, who I really liked. A/N Remember, just fiction)
Then, before I could say anything, Felix wrote he liked her a lot. I shyed away, knowing how
popular Felix was. Then, at the Valentine's Day party, as I was about to give Marzia her valentine,
I told Felix I was too scared. He said he'd give it to her for me. I agreed. I overheard them talking.
Felix: "I made you this beautiful valentine, Marzia!"
Marzia: "Felix! It's so pretty!"
I was furious...Then, a few months later, a boy named Jerome came to NJ. We became best
friends instantly. Felix thought he wasn't cool enough, until one day Jerome won the dodgeball
game for our class and Felix immediately made Jerome ditch me. Jerome wanted all of us
to hang out, but Felix refused...I hated Felix..
~Flashback Ends~
I walked Lilly back to the suite. I wanted her to see I was her true love. I tried to "get it," but she
refused, and told me a depressing story about her past. I wanted to hold her forever. I wanted to
propose to her. I knealt down, but then I didn't have the guts to actually do it, so I tied my shoe.
She reacted accordingly, and I immediately felt terrible.
~LE TIME SKIP TO THE DAY PEWDS CAME TO THE SUITE~
Lilly and I were having a heated discussion about what had happened. Then, I needed to take a
shower, and clear my head. I walked out, and hid behind a door. I could hear Felix talking to Lilly.
I watched, as his talking grew quieter so she would lean in, as if he were the fox that was going
to eat the gingerbread man. Slowly, she leaned in, not thinking. Then, he swooped in and kissed
her. She immediately pulled back, and I decided to pounce. She ran to me. She was so upset. I
felt like punching Felix. Instead, I just kicked him out. No use keeping him here to torture Lil.
A/N Here, we are now totally caught up to date. I should have had MItch's POV earlier, but I guess
I just needed important stuff to happen and yeah lOl)
Lilly's POV
We got out of the water, and I dried off. We walked to our suite and showered. On our way out of the
hotel, Felix stopped us. He was with Marzia.
"Hey bros!" he said.
"Hi." Mitch replied, coldly.
"Hey Felix!" I said enthusiastically, trying to make up for Mitch's unexpected anger.
"Hey bros! So, I'm having a bonfire tonight on the beach. You're welcome to come! We'd love to
have you!" he said.
"Oh, n-" Mitch started to decline. I interrupted, "Of course!" Mitch looked at me, furious. I ignored him.
"We'd love to!" I said. Felix smiled, and so did Marzia. "Great! See you there at 6!" They walked
out, and Mitch was angry. "Lighten up, babe, it's just a party." I said. He grumbled, and we walked
out to the bar.
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END OF CHAPTER 24
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