mlp/one direction: more than a feeling

Hey there wattpaders! !(yes I'll be calling you wattpaders) Anyways, this is my first fan-fiction!  I'll be updating as soon as I can. if you don't like, don't read or hate. it is a romance about 1-D involving mlp. don't hate! thank you!

Now, I present... More than a feeling!

Twilight's POV

Zoom! As I was walking around school with my besties, (uggh. why did I say" bestie?")  I saw a rainbow-colored girl running in our direction. Dashie.

"Guys! Guys! Yo! I gotta tell you something! it's awesome!" she yelled.

"Well then girl, spill!" said AppleJack with a thick southern accent.

We patiently waited as she caught her breath. "I MADE THE CANTERLOT WONDERCOLTS TRACK TEAM!!"

We cheered with excitement. I couldn't believe it! She's been working so hard for a spot on the prestigious team. "That IS awesome!" said Pinkie as she pulled us in for a bear hug. "My loves! I need to tell...

then she fainted. I recognized that voice.

Rarity.

Twilight's POV

"Oh my God, Rarity!" I yelled as I ran to pick her up. I heard sniffling. "Oh Fluttershy, don't cry. it'll be alright." I told her in a soothing voice.

"Whaa..Whaa..what if she*sniff* doesn't make it?" she asked.

"AWW COME ON FLUTTERS! Of course she'll make it! She didn't DIE you know!" answered Rainbow. I gave her a death glare as she said that. Stop that! I mouthed. She gave me an apologetic look. AppleJack and Pinkie came back with the nurse. "Nurse Swirl! We don't know what happened to Rares! She just fainted and we were scared and we didn't know what to do because she just, like fainted so yeah we brought you here to check her!! Please do something!" rambled Pinkie. "Miss Pinkie! Please take a breath before you hyperventilate. Hand her over please Twilight." said Nurse Swirl. l carefully placed Rarity's body in Nurse Swirl. She held Rarity and giggled. "What! What's so freaking hilarious! Our best friend fainted and you're LAUGHING! ?" Rainbow lunged towards her. "Oh girls. Rarity is perfectly fine. She just fainted in shock."replied Nurse Swirl. All five of us gave Nurse Swirl blank looks. Then we joined in with her laughing.

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Well. there ya go! The first two chapters are done! Was it good, bad, awesome, terrible? Comment on what you think. (I'll put more point of views in the chapters!

Later!

AnaXX