Ash's betrayal

Chapter 1. The betrayal

This is my 2nd book please tell me about spelling mistakes.

3rd person

Two people are walking into pallet town, holding hands. One was a young honey blonde and ocean blue eye girl, wearing a pair of black and red basketball shoes, short red skirt, a black tank top and a red hat with a blue piece of ribbon around the hat.this is Serena,she is 13 years old.

And the other was a young boy with raven black hair that is always messy and hazelnut eyes. He is wearing red trainers, black jeans, a black t shirt, a blue jacket and a red hat with a white pokeball on the font. This is ash he is 13 years old.

Serena's pov

"race you Serena." Ash says while running off into pallet town.

"hey ash wait up!" I shout while running after him

They reach ash's house

"come on Serena let's go in" ash says with a smile on his face while he walks in while holding my hand that makes me blush.

"ASH KETCHUM!!" Yells may,drew , dawn, misty, brock,max,Delia,calem,iris. Also Paul and Garry are there but they are not going to betray ash.

"what...why are you all yelling" ash says and I stand next to him

"You're a failure" says may, misty and dawn at the same time.

"you're weak. You should not be a trainer" brock shouts

"you're a little kid" says iris

"ash you shouldn't be with Serena. I should!" Calem yells with anger

"ash you're not my son!!" Yells Delia

Ash stood there speechless with sadness and anger.

"what the hell is wrong with you people. Ash is amazing!!" I scream ash looks up to see Paul and Garry coming by are side.

"I will never betray ash he's my pal. And misty we are over!" Yells Garry as misty's eyes water up with tear and runs away.

"ash is a hearted battler and a heart person. By the way dawn were over." Paul says dawn's eyes fill up with tears and run away crying.

"you all are wrong. You will see." Ash yells. At that moment greninja comes out of his pokeball."greninja smoke screen " ash says and runs with Garry, Paul and Serena to Professor oaks lab and gets all of ash's and Garry's pokemon. Just then charizard lands in font of ash and greninja comes behind ash.

"thank you greninja return." Ash says while greninja goes back into it's pokeball

" come on lets get moving!" Ash yells with sadness as he climes onto charizard's back.I climbed on with Garry and Paul and headed of into the unknown.

I'm leaving this chapter here comment and tell me what you think of this chapter.