Heartbreak Story (jay mcguiness fanfiction)

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This is my first fanfic so if its crap im sorry.... but please let me know what you think much love, also ive kept jayne as the manager instead of scooter, its not that I dont like him but I thought jayne was better xxx

Chapter 1

Today had to be one of the worst days of my life.....

Tears rolled down my cheeks, I was sat in the back of the car with alfie he was trying his best to console me but there was nothing he could do I was a wreck... as the car pulled up to the church there was photographers and press everywhere the police were trying there best to keep them out of the church grounds.

We got out the car Alfie had his arm round my waist as soon as I saw the coffins that my mum, dad, and little sister were in my legs turned to jelly and I nearly crumbled to the floor but alfie held me up, we followed the coffins in and we sat in our places and all I could think about was the day I lost them.

A month ago

It was the day of my dance audition at Charlotte Hamilton School Of Dance, the audition was to be a dancer to go on tour with the wanted for their word of mouth tour , I loved there music but didnt no much about them apart from how god damn sexy mcguiness was, I got to the stage and tried not to fall in a heap on the floor as I saw the boys sat there with there manager and my teacher Mrs Davenport , but all I could focus on were a set of stunning ocean blue eyes and as soon as I saw them I knew they belonged to 'the sexy jay', his eyes were mesmerizing I was lost in them until he winked at me then I just blushed and looked to my hands I was so nervous I didnt think they would be here I thought it would just be Jayne,

Mrs D stood up

"this is Mercedes Johnson, shes my best student that actually listens and concentrates in her classes , shes very close to taking over you Jay, you were a good dancer when you were here but theres something different with Mercedes" she said

"shes hot" one of the boys said

well I was ok I suppose, blue eye's, long brown hair, good figure as a dancer you have to be fit people always told me I looked like Nicole Shertzinger from the pussy cat dolls but I just thought I looked like simple old me.

I bit my lip and tucked a strand of hair behind my ear I was freeking out after that comment.

"Jay..... were here to find dancers not your next piece of skirt, youll put her off" Jayne said

they all laughed.

I looked at Mrs D she was scowling at the boys, I couldnt help but chuckle.

Jays POV

I looked at Mercedes she was stunningly beautiful ive never seen a girl like her she looked a bit like Nicole Shertziger just hotter and fitter, like the idiot that I am I blurted out 'shes hot' Jayne looked at me and said

"Jay... were here for dancers not your next bit of skirt youll put her off"

we all laughed.

I looked up at her and she was biting her lip and tucked a stray bit of hair behind her ear, she was very nervous I hope I haven't put her off.

"when your ready mercie you can begin" Mrs D said

she began to dance and I couldn't take my eyes of her , she was amazing I could see why her teacher had a lot of respect for her she didnt faulter once she was obviously born to dance,

she finished dancing and we all clapped.

Mercedes POV

"When your ready Mercie you can start" Mrs D said

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 07, 2014 ⏰

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