A-dork

In the dark I awoke thirsty. I walked out the door I saw my mother sandwich in hand ketchup all over her. Two bums seeing the door open walked in seeing a chest full of jewelry started ransacking the place. As I screamed in horror I picked up a butter knife and a steak knife. I threw it at the one who strangely looked like Pinocchio, but the butter knife just bounced of so I took the steak and sliced his neck. While I did this the other one look on in terror and drew his blade. I ran toward him aiming my knife at his heart he side stepped and knocked my knife away I looked at him in disgust. He pushed me away telling me to scram. I picked up my knife and said, " Do you know my name my name is Adar !" Running at him full speed stabbing him repeatedly in the chest he said " You will pay for this I swear." Then he dropped to the floor dead. Adar picked up the necklace the man who looked like Pinocchio had. As I walked outside I picked up a can of gasoline and started drenching the house. My mother woke up put her head looked around smelling smoke and gasoline she ran to the door but it was bordered up. She started screaming and pounding on the door. Outside Adar stood watching as flames engulfed the house. One tear mixed with blood ran down his face. Inside his mother still yelling at her son was engulfed by the flames. As the house started breaking apart Adar turned away.

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