Tick Tock

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This whole thing is a whooping 8260 words long, read if only you are bored or something.

Chapter 1

5:50 pm , Timeless cafe, 21 December 2012

Ariana's POV

I was having dinner with my boyfriend, Josh.

I asked "Hey, do you know it is dooms day today?" I dragged the word "dooms".

Josh laughed, "Do you think I have been living under a rock Ari? Of course I know about it!"

He then asked me "What would you do if today was your last day on earth?"

I answered immediately,"I would spend time with you, of course." He smiled and continued eating his food.

Dakota's POV

(When we created this story, I didn't know what to name her, so I named her after a train station.)

I was eating alone by myself and I noticed Ariana and her boyfriend, Josh. Josh was looking at a pretty girl next to him.

I sighed sadly. I was FOREVER ALONE. No boy even looked towards me. I took a sip from my coffee cup. I really should get tips from Ariana on how to get a boyfriend.

Suddenly, I had a sharp pain in my stomach. Oh god, please let it NOT be diarrhea. I shot up from my seat and rushed to the toilet.

Ariana's POV

I got a sharp pain in my stomach. I think I ate too much.

"Is something wrong Ari?" Josh asked worriedly.

"Yeah, my stomach hurts, be back in a minute." I excused myself and rushed to the toilet.

I barged into the toilet, clutching my stomach and I saw Dakota clutching her stomach too.

"Dakota? What are you doing here?" I managed to speak even with the excruciating pain in my stomach.

"I was about to ask you the same thing. Let me guess, you have a stomach pain too?" Dakota asked

I nodded. "It must have been the food. But nothing happened to Josh, strangely."

Just as I said that, the lights began flickering, the ground began shaking. I lost balance and slipped. Grabbing hold of one of the pipes, I looked around and found Dakota beside me. Good, she was safe, but she looked seriously frightened though, she was practically HUGGING the pipe.

"I hate earthquakes!" she exclaimed as she hugged the pipe even tighter. I was so scared that the pain in my stomach had gone.

Suddenly the mirror began glowing.

"Oh my god, what is that?" Dakota asked in shock.

"I don't know, but I think we should close our eyes. It will be over before we know it." (Logic.) I said. I think we were going crazy. A mirror glowing?! Really?!

"Okay, Let's close our eyes on the count of 3....2....1....." we both closed our eyes shut, waiting for the earthquake to pass.

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