The Mysterious Place

Chapter 1

    One day we heard about this place which no one else have heard about. We then had a vote on whether to or not to go because if no one else heard about the place we should not go because we do not know what the place is about. Then the majority had to choose to go to the place. We then headed to the car and mom reversed out of the garage and we headed to the place.
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When we arrived to the place we all ran out of the car excitedly. Aunty said don't run to far but my brother and I were so excited we didn't know how far we ran. So I then decide to run back to my parents. When I was back with my parents​ they asked me where my brother was and I said he was with me.
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My parents and my sister along with me headed to go on the search for the missig boy who we knew as Dominic. We then ran as fast as we possibly can. When we reacedte place where Dominic and I was last seen he wasn't there. We searched the whole place when I suddenly fell in a hole. I then saw my brother being tortured then they came by me and I told them that I am here cause my family wanted to get back Dominic.
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They then said that if we want back Dominic I have to get tortured too. They made me as flexible as wire. They then let both of us go and we ran back to the car. When we reached where the car was we saw my parents along with my sister​ sitting aongside the car crying.
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When I said that Dominic is with me they stopped and watched up. They then saw both of us together. They asked me where I found him and I said that a man took him to torture him. They then said that I was a lifesaver.
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I then asked if we could leave to go home and tht said the we would go for some ice cream because I saved Dominic's life. We then left the surroundings of the place to go for ice cream. We then said that we would never go back to that particular place.