Can't Raise A Man!

Main Character Descriptions:

Peaches: Wears glasses, dresses nerdy , but hella thick. She is smart, cute, and shy, but very determined to not give up. She plans to never give up on people and she wants to go to college to help kids who are underprivileged and pushed to the background just because of where they cone from. She is sensitive though and cry when people yell. She also sometimes tends to give in to other people easily. She likes school, boys, parties, music, and food. She dislikes rude people,negative people, Tv, and people who give up easily.

Chocolate: He is very muscular. Very tall and sexy like August Alsina and he is a big freak. He is very cocky, athletic, and he can be mean pretty often. He says the first thing that comes to mind and doesn't consider people feelings to well. He likes sports, food, and parties. He dislikes sharing things and people. Also he feels school is a waste of time and feels he could be doing something better.

Those are the two main characters. so far just from those descriptions do you think I should gone head and write out the story or change some things? Give me some feedback before I upload the story!!!

-Thxx