What Have I Done to Deserve This?

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I'm falling, as fast as a commet. I'm burning up, yet I only feel it on my back, like there's something being carved into my back. I feel a new pulling sensation towards this rock as I fall. The carving sensation seems to be spreading from two certain spots next to my shoulder blades, these hurt the worst.

I here a loud scream, but its not human, its the air around me. I'm completely stiff, I can't even move my fingers. The burning begins to cool as I approach this rock, which i realize is not a rock at all but a planet, it shines an unnatural light, but only in some small places, and one place in particular where I seem to be falling towards.

There's no warning, just the feeling of cracking ripping through my entire body as I hit an unnaturally hard  ground. As I look around I see chunks of flat grey rock everywhere. I look down at my self to realize, there's no harm done to my bare body, only slight smoke immersing from my back.

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Hey here's my prologue, tell me what you guys think

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