The Trianphalon Forest

The Girls

      This story is made from a story I made in forth-grade the only differences are that its in more detail, I'm adding more chapters, and that this isn't on paper. Skip ahead if you don't want to read this.
     This story is about two girls, Valorie and Misti Susimori. First Valorie, she is the neko with the black hair. She loves singing, the violin, red roses, art, archery, and sometimes writing. Valorie has a lot of courage, sne stands for what she thinks and always takes charge. Next Misti she's the neko with the pink hair, obviously. She loves singing, writing, and the guitar. She is shy, outgoing, and always tries her hardest.

Okay so tell me what you think and if you want me to change something in the comments. Plus I'm sorry this so short of a chapter, but this is just the beginning.