'LOUIS, LOUIS!, WAKE UP!' I hear a voice calling me from down stairs. I know that voice, its my mums voice. 'Coming mum' She always dose this. my inner voice says. My mum always wakes me up to get to work at the diner on time.
'Louis Tomlinson get up and get ready NOW' 'OK MUM' oh god mum can be stubborn some times. I walk downstairs and there mum is where a cup of tea and some cereal. 'Eat up Lou' she says. I sat down and ate the cereal and drank my cup of tea. When I was ready I walked down stairs and kissed my mum on the cheek 'Good bye mum love you' 'Love you Lou be safe now' 'I will bye'
My mum always makes sure I'm safe. Doncaster is a peaceful place but there are a lot of robbers around. None never go to my diner, only truckies, hot girls and the normal people.
I walk up to the diner, I always walk to the diner, its not that far away, its only walking distance. I arrived at work on time (as always). I walked into the diner, all my lads where there, Eleanor was there. Eleanor is my girlfriend and I love her so much, we always love working at the diner together.
'Hello Lou' said Eleanor, 'Hello babe how are you' I asked back 'Good, come you be at the cash register today' she says. Yay.my inner voice says. I like working at the cash register.
So my day was pretty normal. 2 big bloke come in. I'm not scared, big blokes come in all the time. They come up to the counter and say my normal greeting to all costumers 'Hello how may...' they cut me off my saying 'Give us the money' 'What money?' I ask. Are they joking? This happened before 2 big blokes did this prank before. But is it a prank? I don't know.
'The money from the cash register' the 2nd bloke says. I turn to Eleanor and she looks worried at me. 'Give it to us now' The 1st big bloke says. Sorry I can't do that, my inner voice says. I just say what my inner voice says.
'Sorry I can't do that' I say nervously. The 2 blokes look at me and get something from out of their pockets, I don't know. 'Do you want to say that again?' the first one says and gets a gun out.
BANG!
Time stands frozen. I felt the bullet go in me. I fall to the ground and Eleanor and so other staff ran out at me. What's happening? I don't want to die right now. I'm too young, I'm only 20. I was going to prepose to Eleanor. Please tell me this is a dream. 'Lou, LOU can you hear me?' I hear her, but I'm too scared to speak.
I only look at her. Blood, blood is everywhere. I hear people screaming as I hear the 2 men's footsteps running out of the diner.
My eyes are getting heavy. Don't close your eyes, my inner voice says. I'm trying, I'm really trying. 'Louis please don't leave me!' 'I'm not, I promise' I seem to say. She starts to get all teary. No, NO my eyes are closing, they are now closed. Maybe I will wake up in hospital.
I open my eyes and I see Eleanor crying and holding me 'Eleanor?' I say she dose not hear me. I see this girl in white comes to me. No one sees her, only me. She leans her hand out. I grab it and she helps me up, 'Follow me' the girl says, she pulls me out of the diner and into the streets.
I see a police car and a ambulance. This has to be a dream? The girl leads me to a field where there is a big white door, the door opens. 'Go in' the girl says 'What?' I say back. The girl pushes my in and everything is white. 'Where am I?, am I dead?' I ask 'Yes' she says.
'Who are you?' I ask, 'I'm Jay and I'm a guider' 'This has to be a dream' I said, 'No, I'm so sorry Louis but this is not a dream you are dead' 'What?!'
I am really dead, I start to break into tears as I collapsed onto the floor. Jay pats me on the back, Jay is nice I am not going to lie. 'Come with me' she asks politely, 'Where?' I ask ''To the gates'
I look at her. 'I just died' I say to her, 'I know, louis you are just shocked come with me, you can be happy once your past the gates' I snap at her 'NO IM NOT GOING ANYWHERE!' 'I understand we can stay here, just not for long'
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Behond Return (Louis Tomlinson Fanfic)
FanfictionLouis Tomlinson is a normal lad from Doncaster. One day when he was working at a diner he works at, louis gets shot from a robber. Louis dies and gets sent into a different dimension. There he becomes a Guider, who gets souls and talks them to the g...