Who Killed My Mom? (small part of story)

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This is a part of a story I'm working on. I'm not very far in the story but since school ends tomorrow i shall have more time to work on it.

(oh,this is a vampire story)

But please tell me what you think of this:

Mom became still and blood began to fall out of her mouth onto the wood of our floors. The monster released her and she dropped with a thud on the ground. Then he turned and stormed back out where he came from.

The blood was starting to seep down to the cellar and Jessica started to sob on my shoulder. She held me close while no tears came from my eyes.

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