Hes my brothers best friend

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He's My brothers bestfriend Chapter 1

Im really new at this and im telling you now that its gunna be a short first chapter. tell me what i should change give me ideas and tips pleassse and thank you!

Let me start off by telling you a little bit about my self.My names victoria Im 5"2 long brown hair and brown eyes to match. My older brother (star quaterback) is the exact oppisite he's 6"2 short spiky blonde hair blue eye. my brother and i are very close. We have gotten close because our parents are very successful archatechs (idk how to spell that).Which means there always gone. so me and chris always have the house to ourself (chris is my older brother). My brother like i said is on the football team always throws partys and i dont mind because im on the cheer team so im pretty popular myself. My brothers best friend who i have had a crush on since i was like 6 is always at my house because his mom is hardly ever home and his dad is always "working late". my brothers friend brandon is the "2nd" hottest guy in the school the first is my brother. ewwww right well brandons the "1st hottest" in my eyes. its friday which means there is going to be a house party tonight. im up and cant sleep its 3:37 in the morning i plug my head phones into my i pod. as i layed down my favorite song came on.

Can we pretend that airplanes

in the night skys like shooting stars

i can use a wish right now

wish right now wish right now.

i didnt even know it but i had drifted off to sleep, into a dream i have had many times now. " hello georgus" a dark and seductive voice said from behind me. i knew that voice it was brandon was i dreaming or was it my imagination. he's daiting my bestfriend. and yeah i talk to him all the time but never has he called me georgus or anything like that.I opened my mouth to respond and. BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!! my alarm clock wailed in my ear. "AHH" i jumped at the sound and fell off my bed into the floor. There was a knock at my door. Chris never knocked. "Come in" i say jumping off the floor. Brandon walked in and Oh My Gosh he looked georgus. as soon as i seen him my heart started beating really fast i got butterflys and i couldnt help but smile at him. he was oppisit of my brother who always wore basketball shorts and jordans. brandon was more of the cowboy type. he was wearing tight fitting wranglers, cowboy boots, and a button up black shirt. i was sitting there stairing at him. when i heard him clear his throat. i was back into reality and out of lala land. " your brother said to hurry your ass up" he said laughing. all i could do was nod my head i loved his laugh it sent a shock of heat through my body. i blushed and he looked at me and smile, i ran into my huge walk in closet and tryed to find something to wear. i finally settled on a blck pair of skinny jeans and a purple shinny shirt and my convers to match. i curled my hair did my make up and when i walked out of the bathroom. i saw brandon sitting on my bed he looked like he wanted to tell me something like he was in a deep train of thought.

(BRANDONS POV)

I was sitting there on her bed looking around her room when something caught my eye it was a picture of Her me and her brother. it made me smile to know she kept a picture of us around. I heard the bathroom door open and as Victoria walked out she had to be the most Beautiful girl i have ever seen it litearly felt like my heart had stoped this was gunna be a lot harder than i thought to tell her that i was in love with her and karen and i were only together to get victoria to go out with me finally (karen is victorias best friend ull understand that later.) she looked up at me and smiled she was about to say something when

Clifff Hanger

Votesss, Fanns, Comments Help me!! what should happen next???

Thanks for reading

XOXO Victoria

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⏰ Last updated: May 27, 2010 ⏰

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