Surprise!

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It's finally Rachel's birthday! I've been planning on how to surprise her for months now. She is has never been surprised and I think this'll be the one to surprise her.

For years, Rachel and I have had a competition on who would throw the best birthday party for one another. I've never been able to win, hopefully this year she'll have the most surprising birthday.

Here's how my plans going to start..

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It was just a regular sunny day in Los Angeles, when Andy and I were taken by masked men. They were tall and muscular, they blindfolded us before we see more of their features. All we could hear are their deep, rough voices. They're scrambling to try to put us in they're vehicle. It smelled horrid in there, it was like someone has been throwing up in here. I can hear one of the guys struggling to shove Andy into the vehicle. I wouldn't be surprised Andy has been working out since the age of 13. Finally I hear one of the two guys yelling "Hey! Get back here!". Andy has gotten away.

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I don't know if this is a very nice plan but I'm enjoying it. The thought of Rachel freaking the heck out excites me. The next part's going to be cruel but I know it's going to be the best part. It took me a bit of time to plan this but she's always wanted to skydive.

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I can feel one of the guys beside me, I wasn't exactly sure how many there were at first but now I figured one that there's three of them. The two men that took Andy and I, or at least tried taking Andy and a woman who has an extremely annoying British accent.

"Are we ready to go to the place?" The woman in front driving asked.

One of the two men cover my ears which muffles all their voice. I want to struggle but I'm scared. Out of the 24 years of my life this is the scariest experience I've ever gotten. I try to make out the words but I can't they're barely audible.

I don't know how long I've been vehicle but I know I've been for way too long. The smell of the vomit has finally either disappeared or I'm just used to it now. I finally feel the vehicle slowing down. The I hear the door open to the right of me. I feel a strong grip on my arm and a pull. It hurts but I don't want to do anything. They finally manage to get me out, it's very windy. There's a very strong odour, I think it's oil but I'm not very sure. They start dragging me, I can't see my wrists but I bet you they're red by now. We finally stop, the winding is even stronger now. I hear a new voice, but with the blindfold over my ears and the wind blowing it very hard to distinguish.

They start pushing me again and we get into another vehicle, this one is a new one. I can tell just by the fresh aroma. I'm guessing this vehicle is more taken care of than the other. I hear the door slam and one the guys to my right calling out to the new driver to go. He must've been the one talking a minute or two ago. We finally start moving but it's a new feeling. It feels like my heads going to pop off... We're on a plane.

My stomach feels like it's going to explode. The thought of me airborne both frightens and excites me. I've never been on a plane but I've always wanted to be on one, I just didn't want it with a bunch of scary, muscular men. I really hope that Andy is looking for help right now.

We've been on the air for five to ten minutes now. It's been awfully quiet. I just hear them making a bunch of noise from what I think are there guns. Suddenly someone I'm not sure who; straps something around my waist, they tie it super tight. I struggle a bit, but he or she just over powers me.

WOOSH! I hear with a blast of hair hitting my face. I try to run back into who ever's behind me. I can't hear anything. The sound of the wind just overwhelms me.

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Ok, before she jumps. I'm planning on taking a video of her reaction. I bet you she will love it. At this point she should be thinking I'm still looking for help even though I have been watching everything unfold.

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I feel a huge force bump into me and that's it.. The wind in my face and the feeling of wanting to throw up. I can feel someone hooked up to me. This was my dream until today. It's turned into a nightmare.

With the feeling of being weight I suddenly feel my blindfolds come off. I quickly shut my eyes not wanting to see what's probably the last of me when I feeling a tap on my head. I open my eyes wide when I see Andy right in front of me wearing a go pro and holding a sign saying look down. Confused, and thinking I'm hallucinating I try to look down. That's when I see it.. A huge sign on the school football field saying happy birthday.

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Yeah, that's basically my plan. It might sound sick and twisted but I guess you'll never know what's going on in my head. You just know that I might just be the best best friend out there.

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⏰ Last updated: Mar 17, 2014 ⏰

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