Fairies fall rewrite

Chapter 1

So if you didn't know this is the new version of my other book
Please tell me if I have any spelling so I can fix it and get better thanks!!
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~normal pov~

Opening her Eyes Lucy found that she was in a dark room with a small window that had sun light coming though.

Groaning Lucy tried to get up but found she was bonded to a wooden chair.
She started struggling but it was useless. Lucy looked around the room to see if there was a way out, but what she seen paralyzed her, everything stopped.
There right in front of her was Natsu wounded, bloody and unconscious.
"Natsu!!" Lucy screamed and started to struggle again.

"I see you're awake"  Lucy heard a voice from behind her. She couldn't turn around to see who it was. Without think she started struggling again.

Slowly the mystery person made their way around to the front of Lucy and Glared at her.

" I am going to make you pay blondie" it was Dimaria.
Dimaria was wearing a simple brown bandeau, with the upper edge embroidered with a flowery, white lace,loose, pin-striped capri pants,The hems of the legs are decorated with dark piping. Her left forearm is covered by a tight, dark bracer with a wing-like ornament attached to it beneath her elbow. Her right arm is encased in golden armor.with short wavy blond hair.
"You are going to die in this very room for what you did to Brandish! But first i want to take something away from you"  Dimaria Looked at Natsu before smirking and walking over to him.
"Get away from him!" Lucy shouted
Ignoring Lucy Dimaria took her sword out and placed it at Natsu Neck.
"Stop!" Lucy shouted again. She was in tears.
Not wanting to watch her best friend muder right in front of her, she closed her Eyes.
"Haha i ain't going to kill him...yet"
Dimaria smirked and started walking back to Lucy.

Lucy opened her Eyes again one to be met face to face with Dimaria
"First i want to have some fun with you!" Dimaria smirked
"You know what i noticed? You have such big beautiful eyes i wonder what would happen if i took them"  Dimaria started Laughing. Lucy's eyes had tears forming in her eyes.
Just then Lucy felt heat, flashes of red was all she seen before everything went Black.

-Lucy pov-

"Lucy??"i tried to open my eyes, but everything hurt "lucy??" i know that voice but who does it belong to?? Slowly i try and open my eyes, as soon as they are open i see "wendy??"
"Lucy you're awake!!" Just like that everything that happened came flowing back to me. I start to panic " where is Natsu??" " Natsu-san?? I don't know. when we arrived you and that girl over there was the only one sorry" Girl? I look over and see Dimaria on the ground out cold,part of  her clothes look as if they were burned off. i look around the room and see porlyusica behind wendy, " we need to find Natsu last time i seen him..." last time i seen him he looked as if he was about to die, NO!! I must not think like that  "lucy??" wendy says getting my attention " we need to find Natsu last time i seen him he look wounded badly"  " ok we will but first you should put some damn clothes on" said porlyusica handing me a new outfit that look similar to the one i was wearing before. I look down only to see that porlyusica was right!!!

-after lucy got dressed-

"Wendy go with lucy me and evergreen will stay here and watch over this girl you and Wendy  go look for natsu and bring him back here!!"
"Alright" both me and Wendy say.

-20 mins of looking around-

We been walking for 20 minutes now, this whole time we been walking around with nothing to go on... where do we start?? Right now we are in a field, it looks as if their was a fight here not to long ago.

"Karyū no Hōkō!!"  (FIRE DRAGON ROAR!!)
That sounds like Natsu! Me and Wendy look at each other, we start to run, I see Gray on the ground. "Gray!!" Wendy screams "stay back!" Gray orders " Natsu he's not thinking right"  Gray says i didn't listen
I kept running, as soon as I got to Gray I seen him, "natsu?" My hand covers my mouth There he is Natsu, wearing his same old clothes his scarf , but he was different...   fire flew out out of him like a giant torch, the heat was like standing right over lava."l-luce??" I barely miss it, little more than a whisper, "Natsu!!" I try to run ahead but Gray grabs my shoulder " No" Gray says, Gray is bleeding badly"I will heal you!" Wendy says as she puts her hands next to Gray's back and a blue magic circle forms, " He's not..." before gray could finish talking Natsu attacked.
"Karyū no Yokugeki!!" (Fire dragon wing attack) "Shīrudo!!"( ice make Shield!!)
Next think I see is a giant ice wall blocking the attack Natsu delivered only to break apart as soon as Natsu attack ended.
Natsu?? I look at him... he's crying
"Karyū no Hōkō"(fire dragon roar!!) Gray can't block it in time what do I do!?! "Ice make slide!!" ( it's a move look it up) gray grabs me and Wendy And we slide barely missing the attack.

-normal pov-

Gray pulled the two girls out of the way just in time, slamming his hands on the ground he yelled " Ice Make:Ice Wall!!"
Before Natsu had a chance to react a wall of ice shot up from beneath him, Freezing him. Not wasting anytime Gray slammed his hands together Another ice tower shot out of the ground. Gray jumped into the air yelling "Ice-Make: Death scythe!!" (Desu Saizu~?~)
Creating a large scythe Gray attacked Natsu, Breaking him out of the ice and sending him crashing to the ground.
Still Natsu got up, blood was flowing from his head, a large gash came across his chest.
Seeing this made Gray feel Guilty.
Lucy was panicking what was happening?? Why was Natsu attacking them??
"Fire Dragon's Iron fist!!"(Karyū no Tekken)
Natsu fist lit aflame as he started to run at Gray. Gray was on the ground kneeling , he was tried, that last attack took too much magic.
Lucy seen this , doing the only thing she could think of, she pulled Taurus key out and shouted
" Star-dress: Taurus Form"
A light surrounds Lucy
When it disappeared Lucy was wearing nothing but a bra and sleeves with a cow pattern and pants that leave her right leg entirely revealed, she also has a pair of gloves and boots as well as a belt where Taurus Zodiac sign is located and a bag around her waist. While sporting this dress she uses her hair in two buns, one at each side of her head abut also leaving some hair hanging. Lucy also had her whip.

"Earth wave!!" (Āsu Weibu)
Lucy Strikes the ground with her whip, causing it to rupture Stopping Natsu.

Natsu fell to the ground
"Natsu!!" Lucy yelled
"Please snap out of it!!" 

A voice came from the shadows

"Shi no Hoshoku"(Death predation!!)

Zeref...